Watching the light slowly fading from your eyes
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@USERNAMEDSOBER No its fine, i dont mind comment, either way. I am surprised that the last poem i wrote you think better then this, whereas I the Poet who wrote both can clearly see this one is far better thent he last one. So thats why i questioned your comment. I was interested in why you felt this was better then last, as last i felt after reading wasn't that good, this one i felt was tidier and more deep.
JohnDoylepoems 1 year ago
I am a poet looking for insperation, i am sorry if you were offended by my last comment, sometimes i dont know how to share my feelings, what i meant to say was that i dont like the poem at all, and i think you are more talented than this poem, this is why you share right , for feedback? I am working on getting a camera and recording some of my own poems and i will not be upset if you say some are good and some are not. take care.
USERNAMEDSOBER 1 year ago
@USERNAMEDSOBER Who are you??????? Why are you asking me do I really like this poem? Why do oyu think I can do better, in my eyes this is just as good if not better then my last few poems, so not sure why you say that.
JohnDoylepoems 1 year ago
Hello again , do you really like this poem? I believe you can do better than this.
USERNAMEDSOBER 1 year ago