High Point part 1 out of 3(Indie Martial arts action film)
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Come runing in the house, "Yo dude I just hear what happened, GOD DAMN! yo you really did get the shit beat outta'ya"
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HAHAHAHA! Never back down- "That boxing shit don't work you gotta mix it up!"
Kind of hard to hear and understand what they're saying.
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wow..that amanda's a bitch lol jk ur all awesome! especially brian lol big fan xD
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augh........
tori is in this one
ew
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ok.. first of all your opening is fair but could have less shaky angles. Still opened the atmosphere though.
It's hard to hear the dialogue. Especailly when the music is a bit loud.
watch the jump cuts. there's a quite a few.
Who's that guy that comes into the house? He's a good actor.
The story is connected but it seems silly a massive feud started all over a tiny argument.
Overall the shots go on a bit long. Try some more cuts on simple shots. Don't make a shot long unless it is dynamic
Ok thanks for the opening i'll work on keeping the camera still next time. The guy who came into the house he's name is trey and yes he's a really great actor and we all just improvised. We had to change why our characters were made at each other in order to save time and we didn't want the film to be too long but we had alot of changes through out the project but we seemed to get through it. Thanks for watching darren i really appreciate it very much
Fearlessmaster12 3 years ago