a college student wakes up hung over to find that he has many voicemails from a girl he barely remembers from the night before. Her emotonal messages make him wonder if she is the girl he is looking for.
Editing wasn't that great, some cuts just seem delayed. Sound, pretty much horrible background noise that keeps appearing and disappearing when every new shot comes in, very annoying.. Not enough close ups of actors... some bad angles etc.. nice try, decent story..
I HATE short films, but this was actually one of the few that I really, really like. It kept me watching the entire time.
Overall, it had a Clerks feels to it. (Can't explain that, but it's a compliment)
Although some of the acting seemed a bit forced. Needs a LITTLE more work to sound more natural. But, for non-prefessionals, mostly, it was very, VERY GOOD!
Excellent editing, good story. Sound quality modulation needed some adjustment (especially for the phone calls). Great job casting, and working camera angles.
Editing wasn't that great, some cuts just seem delayed. Sound, pretty much horrible background noise that keeps appearing and disappearing when every new shot comes in, very annoying.. Not enough close ups of actors... some bad angles etc.. nice try, decent story..
gskowal 2 years ago
the first thing i like to do the morning after being with two chicks is have a flat, room temperature BL from the night before.
whtdudwitdrdz 3 years ago
That was very well done! Excellent writing!
I HATE short films, but this was actually one of the few that I really, really like. It kept me watching the entire time.
Overall, it had a Clerks feels to it. (Can't explain that, but it's a compliment)
Although some of the acting seemed a bit forced. Needs a LITTLE more work to sound more natural. But, for non-prefessionals, mostly, it was very, VERY GOOD!
Shaggy72 4 years ago
lol!!!
WastedIncProductions 4 years ago
fuck off no such thing as this funny
PrinceLonghair 4 years ago
yeh good story man! i liked it! if i could offer advice i would say try to pan around with the camera. sont just keep it in one place
peace
danyl123 4 years ago
Excellent editing, good story. Sound quality modulation needed some adjustment (especially for the phone calls). Great job casting, and working camera angles.
daddyvaughn 4 years ago