Things Left Behind in a Small Town Coffee Shop | An Original
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I've been meaning to post a comment on this poem for sometime because its ideas seem to mirror my own experience. As I travel round London, I observe the people and things around me and wonder about their stories... "They catch my eye, plant seeds of questions in my mind." Children are good at this but many adults just can't do it. In this poem solid images lead to abstract thoughts...I think this is
the essence of poetry.
Thanks for posting this
Love, Peter
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Disturbing imagery.
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geez you too, get a room!
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Familiar and new - Thank you!!
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You know, you're absolutely right. I embrace my oddities :)
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Your voice is great and the poem's evocative - it felt so familiar and still new!
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Your welcome, I enjoyed the stay:)
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it's those oddities that help us realize who we are.
P.S. I like your new video image, it is now as crisp and clear as your wonderful poetry.
nordicsky 2 years ago
Thank you Peter. Children remind me that the magic in the world is found within us.
MsWriteNow 2 years ago