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Uploaded by on Oct 11, 2009

Short Story

First of all, let me explain. This story is really short, but there's no love. Yes, there is love but not in a.. Oh, screw it all. Just read it and you will see. There will probably be around..3 to 4 chapters? And by the way they are really poor.Well they have a house, obviously, and..Ugh, just read it :D It's Lolza363 writing, just so you know :D

Faith xoxo

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At 8, he's my Transformer

Ever since I was little, it was unfair. So what if he's 10 minutes older than me, why does he have to be the boss of me? He points his finger at my forehead and says, even if it's just a minute, I'll still be your older brother, and still be the boss of you!
I order him around like a bossy boots. I say, hey, Joe, I'm hungry, go get me a pie. He listens to me so well, grabbing the stool, standing on it, on his tiptoes and carefully gets the money box from the shelf. He rattles it by my ear, saying, so much money. I grab the money box and hug it to me,saying, the money is all mine, you can't have it. He glares at me. Who would want it? He scoffs. I say, you turn around and don't look. He turns around obediently. I get 3 coins out of the box and say, okay,Joe, turn back around. He turns around and takes the money box from me, puts it back where it was.
He pants infront of me, the pie danging from a bag on his wrist. The pie tastes good, but I'm bored, and say to him, Joe, turn into a TV! He pretends to be a TV, his arms held up ontop of him to make antennas.He asks, Demi, what do you want to watch? I say, Animal Planet, I want to watch a tiger.
He turns into a tiger, roaring infront of me, prancing around. I say giraffe, and he streches his neck. I say eagle, and he runs around the room flapping his arms. I laugh, saying Joe, your eagle looks like a chicken!
He tries to fix the broken TV, slapping it with his hand, but it's still blank. I wave my hand saying, never mind, Joe, you'll never fix it. He says, when I grow up, I'm going to buy you one.
So, I wait for him to grow up, but I don't want to grow up. Because Dad says, Demi, when you grow up, I won't be able to piggyback you anymore. I point to the little boy standing next to me, Joe can piggyback me! He doesn't always listen to me. He glares at me, Demi, why do I have to piggyback you, you're so fat! I say, it's your fault, you bullied me in Mom's stomach, squeezing me so much that my leg broke, of course you have to piggyback me.
Mom claps her hand over my mouth, tears dripping onto my right leg. It's really short, and heaps thinner than my left leg. I didn't understand her tears then, and comforted her, saying Mom, Dad's here to piggyback me, and when I get too heavy for him, there's always Joe.

At 14, he's my Superman

Joe grew fast, tall and skinny,like a twig that will fall over when the wind blows. I'm in the same class as him in school, and all my classmates ask, is he really your brother? He's skinny and you're normal, he's tall and you're short, and your leg..Before they even finish Joe runs at them and grabs their collar, saying, if Demi isn't my sister, is she yours? Keep talking and I'll beat you up! Soon, he is overprotective and won't let anyone near me. I'm angry,saying Joe, all my classmates won't come near me because of you, I will be lonely, you know? He says, I'm here, how can you be lonely? I'll go wherever you want to go. I say I want to go to the toilet, are you going to follow me there? He frowns, and reluctantly hands me over to a girl, saying don't let Demi fall over.
I come out of the toilet and seeing him standing there waiting for me, all my classmates laugh. I feel embarrased, and say to him, Joe, you're really annoying, don't follow me around. He kneels down, looking at me with determination in his eyes. He says, because I'm your brother, so I have to follow you.
What kind of excuse is that! I yell at him and ignore him for the rest of the day. He stays with me the whole day, not saying anything. We go to the neighbour's house to watch cartoons, he points at the TV and says, Dems, you're her, and I'm your knight in shining armour, I'll always protect
you! I say, I don't like her, I like the other girl. Or, you can be Doraemon, whatever I want, you'll get. He looks down and says in a small voice, if I'm Doraemon, I'll get you a healthy leg.
When I'm secretly wiping my tears, I suddenly realise the reason of Mom's tears. I stop blaming him for squeezing me in Mom's stomach, I begin hating myself.

Okay next chapter up soon :D

If you can't find the next chapter, go to 'more of jicklovaa's videos' and it should be there :D Chapter 2.

Faith xoxoxo

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  • I have a twin!!! His names Aidan, and hes older. And hes protective. But hes also my best friend.

  • Oh..I'm sorry :( Your stories are awesome though :D Love them. Love you. Is that too weird....?

  • aww..in what way can you relate to it? Thanks :D

  • Lol, so do you guys like it? I was bored and got inspired by a fork :D

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