Your observation was spot on. This 16 year old student of mine was making her very first video. So, not bad for a first-timer. But, yes, a revision would be a good idea, and a very essential part of the learning process.
the pictures are great but i think the music used clash with poem. anyway, it was a good attempt. perhaps you would care to improve on it? thank you for the upload.
Your observation was spot on. This 16 year old student of mine was making her very first video. So, not bad for a first-timer. But, yes, a revision would be a good idea, and a very essential part of the learning process.
joyqyl 3 years ago
the pictures are great but i think the music used clash with poem. anyway, it was a good attempt. perhaps you would care to improve on it? thank you for the upload.
MrYaoYao18 3 years ago