My entry into the Brooks Running Haiku Contest.
UPDATE: My entry was awarded honorable mention!
I've got a Brooks "Run Happy" t-shirt headed my way! *fist pump*
I chase the sun
as the wind swirls the leaves green
Find peace in the pain
I've got over 300 miles on my Glycerin 8's
& I need some new kicks!
In the interest of full disclosure...
I'm fully aware the first line only has 4 syllables but I believe it has 5 moras.(or on) The key word being "believe."
Although haiku are often stated to have 17 syllables, this is inaccurate as syllables and moras are not the same. Yeah... most of us have been taught incorrectly our entire lives. AMERICA! EFF YEAH! Seriously though, I realize I may have still screwed up the whole moras/on thing. Those more knowledgeable in the subject are welcome to opine & set me straight.
Upon further consideration it's feasible that this thing has about 40 moras.
*sighs dramatically*
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"Bad Mojo" by Omnisine:
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-Allen
Oh no! Did you get MObbed?! You don't have a SHIRT on.... good thing they didn't need anything else, like Your SHOES and stuff... You Run reeel Guud and stuff! = )
GreenxXxPeace 10 months ago
@GreenxXxPeace Why thank you ma'am. I talk reel guud anstuff in the new one! >:D
JustA11en 9 months ago
Nice Video always love watching men run without their shirts on! ;)
proofisinthepudding 10 months ago
@proofisinthepudding I didn't have a shirt on? hmm… >:P
JustA11en 9 months ago