ROYALTY AND A CHILD (poem)
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Lovely.
It's great every now and then finding one of your poems as I travel the Tube.
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a first night togther, then yes...wine and hide your eyes in the morning. but after 4-5 months? this girl was hiding from herself. maybe still is. nonetheless, a truly beautiful poem -- and maybe one of your most personally revaling? -- with great insight into why men still can love women, even after all the cunts recently spawned and sent to castrate us.
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I was really interested and hooked. I probably can't understand the feelings completely, but I can appreciate a GREAT piece of work when I see it! I am reall fond of this piece!
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That's IT! I can't take all the procrastination! David, why aren't you required reading at my university's intro to lit class?!! You NEED TO BE PUBLISHED ALREADY! I really dig your shit, man.
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sir.....your delivery is fantastic...all lazy and slow yet completely switched on.
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excellent poem
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I love this one, David. I intended to click 5*, but my finger slipped on the mouse! I hope that counts, nevertheless. Great work, indeed.
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WOW! I'm hooked. How shall I get anything done tonight for this new discovery? You my dear have brought shame upon my household, for now the dishes sit unwashed, the laundry in a crumpled heap still warm in it's basket, and the crumbs on the floor - at least the mice shall have a feast tonight! but I shall look a mess at work with my wrinkled socks... dishonor and shame, thank you! :)
Hey, Poet this is brilliant, wonderful laid back poetry. I think the way you read your poems suits the style so well. I guess your poetry reminds me of Charles Bukowski, who is one of my favourite writers. I have only been writing for one year and have a mountain to climb but I think that reading your work will be a help.
Thanks for posting this.
Regards, Peter
nordicsky 4 years ago
nordicksy: Only a year? You gotta be kidding me. You must have started when I first got on youtube as DavidKabuki - and when I saw your videos I thought, "Oh, well this is the work of seasoned pro." ANYONE READING THIS CHECK OUT NORDICSKY's channel - GREAT STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DavidRandallCurtis 4 years ago
actually you are quite a smug looking bastard, what are you so smug about? I still think the poem is adorable!
katwoman11 4 years ago
katwoman11: I'm as smug as a bug in a rug ;)
DavidRandallCurtis 4 years ago