Uploader Comments (shadow99reviews)
All Comments (24)
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its great
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really good i like the blood and the gun noises
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I would have to say its pretty good, but 3 things: try to make the blood effects more real and less dramatic, see what you can do with the transitions but they're pretty good, and add the green filter to the blood effects. Nice job
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it was entertaining (althought it didnt make any sence :P ) . I just cant stop wondering why you didnt choose to use your airsoft guns insted of your hands...
For being a regual guy i give you 9/10 ^^
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it looks really cool and interesting. the having no guns there really lets u think aboout whats happening. maybe having muzzle flashs would help as well just to make it seem more real because it works but its kinda questionable. i have a friend who like you airsofts and produces movies. though his filming style is similar to urs. though i have to admit urs seems a bit more creative you might wanna check his videos out his profile name is penguink1993.
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The trailer didnt give any sort of feeling for storyline. looks interesting though.
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I thought it was good, although I didn't see much of a point to what was happening.
Maybe do an intro on the setting. Was it a gang rivalry? Was it just some guns dealers? Include these kinda things but overall 5/5.
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awesome, but your lighting in some places was too bright and you needed to have some physical effects too, like some fake blood on the actor, but otherwise, very good.
it was good but as mention story line u and my friend are similer in that story lines tend to get lost or confused
MonkeyDude1239 1 year ago
@MonkeyDude1239
Thanks a lot. I will definitely look him up. I agree with you that there is not really a story line in my film. This is because we based the entire film to work around the clip that is in this video. It is a short 1 and a half minute film I made for my friend for school. We thought it was cool so we wrote the story around that. But once we got to filming we really just made everything up as we went. The film was at first supposed to be a test of my new camera.
Thanks again!
shadow99reviews 1 year ago
Looks pretty good. You've always had a good eye for filming. My only suggestion would be to not use copyrighted music. I know its a pain, but hearing music from BHD in a suburban setting is pretty distracting. Anyway, good stuff, I look forward to seeing more great videos from you.
--Freezer
godsairsofters 1 year ago
@godsairsofters
Thanks for the positive feedback. I do agree with you in the fact that it is hebrew lyrics in an American suburb but we found that the shear emotion that the music produces made it a perfect fit for what we were looking for.
shadow99reviews 1 year ago