In Your Hands-A Jonas Brothers Story-Chapter 1

This is a fictional story about the Jonas Brothers. Hope you like it!
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(Hayden's Point of View)
"Can you please convince your mom to use her awesome friendship with Creamie to get us tickets?" I begged for the millionth time that day to Emily, my best friend.

Emily's mom was a local singer who knew d.J. Creamie at the radio station in our city.

The radio station in our city was advertising a call-in contest to win three tickest to the Jonas Brothers performace at the radio station.

"Emily, I'm home!" we heard Emily's mom yell from the kitchen. We sprinted into the kitchen and begged Emily's mom to call Creamie. We didn't stop until her mom had picked up the phone, dialed Creamie's number, and said "Hey Creamie!"
We watched intenly as her mom talked to Creamie and waited with anxiousness as she hung up the phone. "You're going to see the Jonas Brothers!" she declared.
We most likely broke one of Emily's mom's eardrums, because the two of us then screamed,
"WE'RE GOING TO SEE THE JONAS BROTHERS!!"
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After the performance, I was full of energy and in awe. It had been the first time I had ever seen the Jonas Brothers live in person (well...from a distance) before and they were AMAZING!

Emily and I waited outside the radio station along with a small crowd of fangirls waiting for the jonas brothers to come out. We held a sign that said "Hold on...and give me your number!" We didn't know if it was going to work, but two girls could try.

Nick finally walked out of the station, followed by Kevin, and then Joe, who was talking on his iPhone. he hung up, put it in his pocket, and waved to all the fans. He finally noticed our poster and smiled.
"I wish!" we heard him yell. Joe Jonas wished he could give us his number...what could be better than this?

Then, he tripped. Several things fell out of his pocket, but he threw them back into his pocket with one quick swoosh.
He waved to the fans one last time and then got onto the tour bus with Nick and Kevin. I swear he looked right at me and Emily when he waved.

The tourbus drove off and we sighed, sad to see the Jonas Brothers leaving. I pulled my phone out of my pocket so I could call my mom and tell her we were leaving, but being the clumsy one I am, I dropped my phone. Without bothering to look down at the ground, I bent down on my knees and grabbed a phone...but it wasn't mine. I helpd an iPhone in my hand that closely resembled the one I had seen Joe Jonas holding only minutes beforehand.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Jonas
• Brothers
• Chapter
• One
• In
• Your
• Hands
• S.O.S.
• acoustic

[mileycyrus4ever]

just like to point out that this is a youtube story, its SUPPOSED to suck. no, this is not a rip off of the idea of Stuck in the Suburbs. They do not trade phones. she gets his phone + keeps her own. she does not find out that joe jonas writes his own songs and is a really down to earth guy. she ends up liking him + they get into a relationship, just like every other youtube story out there=not THat much like stuck in the suburbs. +its not like this is a serious story of mine. the writing sucks

[tml0595]

This is rushed like crazy. You should slow it down. Also, get a more original idea. I've seen another story with the same exact idea. This could be considered copyright because you copied the idea off of "Stuck in the Suburbs".

[SdM45]

EPIC FAIL!!!!