My Immortal Chapter 43
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she took her bra and thong off before she took her clothes off?
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Wow, only one chapter left to be read. Good job on this series of readings. I love how no one in this fic can keep their hormones under control, not even when they're in potential danger.
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I would just l;ike to say, since it's Christmas, I freakin love you.
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@TonyBranston Powers on an emo goth vampires are astounding.
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A car smashes through the windows of the Great Hall, just when there happens to be a orgy happening....well shit...what are the odds of that 1 in a 11111111111111111111
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thumbs up for that 24 reference :P
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What happened to Satan while Draco, Enoby and Vampire were doing it?
"I took off my bra, my thong, and the rest of my clothes". Um, shouldn't that be in the other order? Unless she wears her bra and thong outside of her clothes. Which is entirely possible?
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"Didn't Voldemort appear at the end of the last chapter?"
I think he left to go put his high heels on. He'll start cumming soon. XD
BTW, what was the point of this chapter? Draco and Ebony smoke a joint, Vampire shows up, Satan wakes up, Lupin starts taking off his clothes, and then the four teens have an orgy...
Then Snape shows up.
What the fuck?!
Wait, isn't that Draco's car? Or Satan's? I'm pretty sure one of them had that license plate.
Also, only one more chapter? Damn. Isn't there any hilariously bad fanfic with an ending? My Immortal, Rose Potter, legolas by laura, My Inner Life...
KoyasuNoBara 2 months ago
@KoyasuNoBara Both of them do. It might be the same car: maybe in the original timeline Lucian got the car when Satan became Voldemort, and then gave it to Draco. I guess Snape stole it when he got back from Azerbaijan, whatever he was doing there.
... The Last War, Hogwarts Exposed, Twila... I think Starkit's Prophecy has an ending of sorts, but it's unusual in that.
szaleniec1000 2 months ago