aiwoavril - ai ni 爱你 (1st composition)

Hello guys, it's been a while again. I was kinda busy with my studies, while at the same time, trying to find time, place and materials to produce my own songs. So, here it is!
This is my first completed composition (though not my first composition). Basically, I wrote the song, the lyric (sorry for my bad mandarin, not good enough, but i try), and I try to arrange the piece. everything is original.
remarks:
1. I compose it for fun. not as professional singer or musician. (can criticize, but please to use vulgar language, tx)
2. equipment: 1guitar, 1 head phone, 1 mic(broken d), audiocity 1.3 BETA.
3. how to do background song? just record different backgrounds and paste it together.
4. This song is written for any couples. Even if you have difficulties, cherish and appreciate the time together as you only have 1chance to meet each others.

爱你
曲︰AIWOAVRIL
詞︰AIWOAVRIL
編︰AIWOAVRIL

一个人孤单的时候
想打个电话对你说
我好想念你的温柔
只怕你嫌我太罗嗦
我们在一起手牵手
难免偶尔会闹分手
你说这是我太执着
重来都不肯要认错
我不想这样就失去你
曾经的那些回忆
永远都不忘记
CHORUS
请让我说多一次我爱你
想大声说你是我的唯一
请别再说我不够多诚意
其实我真的真的想和你在一起
说过不会再逃避
将一起写下故事的结局
让爱情继续那么的甜蜜
我怎么会那么容易的放弃你
(just repeat later)

Category:

Music

Tags:

• aiwoavril
• ai ni
• 爱你
• production

[NeLL4Life8]

wow i'd love to hear this done with a legit recording studio

[CleanScienceWay]

nice!



[pear302]

一直要po歌哦,,我是忠實的fans~:）．

[freshjellyfish]

The chorus is so catchy!! 中毒了！

[SolerFF]

great voice to compensate with the song

[evilb0is]

nice song! Hope to see u post more of your composition!

[dhokko34]

Please support AIWOAVRIL! Go to facebook and like AIWOAVRIL page ! :-) Thank u all fans :-)

[gitaplayer]

it is actually pretty good!! rock on dude

[timmysedin]

i'd buy it if you put it on itunes. great job, as usual. :)

[musicxian]

These are some of my thoughts merely and hope that you will have more improvements next time.加油!