Uploaded by ElizaHasNoPoint on Apr 20, 2009
This is a story wrote by ElizaLuvsU94 and stja4!! We both have our own storys but are trying a 'collaboration' now hehe!!
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Elizas POV:
"Come on Lissa we gotta go!!", I yelled up the stairs. I didnt want to picture what would happen to us if we would come to late again.Brian would probably kill us!
I pulled the trench coat a little closer over my outfit for tonight.Now I was feeling fresh, but I knew when I would go home..I would feel the oh-so known disgust for myself. Lissa came running down the stairs in her outfit for tonight.[a/n thats what shes wearing http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=8055270]
"Wow Lissa uhmm you look--", I started but stopped myself when I saw her face drop. I looked down at myself and noticed that I didnt look any better then her.[http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=8055533]
Lissa grabbed my hand and pulled me out of our apartement when we heard a car honk infront of it. We walked out and saw our car wish was supposed to bring us to 'The Dolls'.The strip club we are currently working at..and yes you heard right strip club! Me and Lissa both are 15 years old and were still going to high school.We both have the dream to go to college and live our lifes the way we want to, but we cant do that without the right money!And thats why were working as Dolls..thats what Brian our boss calls the girls who strip for him.
"Bitches!!",the guy from inside of the car yelled,"Get in the car of I think Ill have to teach you a lesson!!"
Lissa pulled me towards the car again and we sat down pulling our trench coates in the right places. I didnt even want to think about wich old disgusting man would touch me today and I tried to get the pictures out of my head.
"Dolls,why dont you take those coats of?!", the guy in the front asked and smirked in the mirror. I shivered..this was so disgusting but I was actually used to it! I had to do this for so long and I just kinda turned my brain off..Lissa didnt feel so..well let me say she is not so used to it yet. She is one of the popular girls and all the guys are after her, but she cant take it!She wants to be popular but she doesnt want all the jocks in school,just slapping her ass as if it was normal or whistling behind her.
"Were here!", the guy said and we got out of the car.Lissa got her purse and we walked in the strip club. We went through the back door and when we entered it someone came running towards me and wrapped her arms around my neck.It was Tara.
"I missed you Eliza", she said and pulled away from me.I faked a smile and nodded while taking off my trench coat and Brian came over to me,pulled me closer to him and kissed me right on the lips.His hand was on my neck pushing me closer to him. Then he just pulled away whiped his mouth and did the same to Lissa.She looked so sad and I couldnt help but walk over to her and hug her. She sniffled,pulled away from me and whiped her eyes.
"Its ok..", she mumbled and checked herself in the mirror. She nodded to herself and walked out and closed the door behind her.I heard men groaling and whisteling and knew I had to get out there too..
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LOVED IT!!!
AnothaJbfan4341 2 years ago
I loved the first chapter please post more!
grovychic2 2 years ago
I LOVE ELIZA'S SKIRT!!!!
Mackynut13 2 years ago
"stripper" thing:]
i love the whole
jobe thing
;]
diamondgirlrox 2 years ago
you should like posty this again [:
FANxElizaLuvsU94 2 years ago
luv it a lot!!!! please post more like now!!!! :-D
twilightloverxD12 2 years ago
love it post more
nltvfcjblover 2 years ago
:) love it!!!! please more now now now now!!!
this one is soundng better then nick story!
KelseyBone 2 years ago
wow
thats all i gotta say!
post more soon!
luvinjb101 2 years ago
Luv it more plz
nickjons512 2 years ago