A song I wrote about the beauty in the fear of a woman to trust me with their heart.
You hold a balance of beauty and fear
That masks you oh so crystal clear
Your eyes are liars, your tear holds the secret
If only I could endure beneath it
Beauty is nothing compared to your voice
And fear is nothing but simply a choice
But the way you wear their matching shades
Is nothing short of a pretty afraid
You dance on a line drawn upside down
and follow an arrow that points inside out
Take my hand, and follow my song
I whistle a melody that's never played wrong
Beauty is nothing compared to your kiss
And fear is nothing to simply dismiss
But the way you wear their matching shades
Is nothing short of a pretty afraid
You smile with eyes and see with your touch
All you could give is never too much
But all you have to offer, my love
Would flood below with all that's above
Beauty is nothing compared to your eyes
And fear is nothing but one simple lie
But the way you wear their matching shades
Is nothing short of a pretty afraid
In the Whole it's good, your sing is good, and there are some great parts, but there are also some disharmonic disturbing parts, but you have an undeniable potential, excuse me if This comment was conceited xD. And excuse me if my vocabulary is kind of weird, i'm swiss, So i think that i probably made some gramatical mistakes, and if i don't, don't care of all the second part of This comment xD
bengllakak 4 months ago
Heard this at lunch today :D Its beautiful man.
ignasidiz 1 year ago