This is actually quite brilliant. Answering a near, exact excerpt from the original piece, responding to each line while keeping the exact rhyme scheme. My friend, I do believe that you should do the entire piece. I love "Last Thoughts" - and i have always hated any and every attempt to bite off it, redo it, mimic it etc. This would include the Jack Johnson version, can't stand it. I was expecting to hate this, lol ;) But what you've done here...it's very original.
Brilliant
JazSmithPresentation 1 month ago
If you like the original piece, check out my rendition of it. It really will change your life.
gregorybrandt 4 months ago
This is actually quite brilliant. Answering a near, exact excerpt from the original piece, responding to each line while keeping the exact rhyme scheme. My friend, I do believe that you should do the entire piece. I love "Last Thoughts" - and i have always hated any and every attempt to bite off it, redo it, mimic it etc. This would include the Jack Johnson version, can't stand it. I was expecting to hate this, lol ;) But what you've done here...it's very original.
mobmusic76 5 months ago
watching this, thought it was going to be a hack. very good thanks for your thoughts friend
kiffahS 5 months ago
Thats good mate, wondering the same
theyak888 6 months ago
I Was Just feeling the same way...except the part about god, awesome poem
SFwhitegirl 7 months ago
amazing!
1ninna 10 months ago
awesome! :)
Nasinification 1 year ago