Really good video, I like the somber tone in the beginning. The editing and pacing are also spot on. Keeping it and back and white was also a good idea. Nice job
First of all, I think you did a really good job. The composition of the video was excellent. I agree that there should have been maybe a scene or two more about the bad relationship at the beginning. Overall though I think it was excellent. Good job!
also i really like the cuts to black with the drum beats. they turned out good.
i would have to say the best shot is emily walking down the hall and then cutting to a close up of her walking down the hall.
the knife stabbing scene also turned out great and i liked the montage of her behind the cheating bf, to the raised knife, to the stabbing. very taseful!
finally the fades of stabbing to kissing and back to stabbing were good and filled nicely.
i think the beginning needed more footage of the bad relationship and plus the guy kept laughing cause hes a fag.
second i think the part where the guy is with the other girl looked better in sync with the beat of the song rather than words, but it was a good choice to keep it with words because thats how the rest of it was.
i like how the turntable scene worked out, i see how you kept it in sync with the beats. the triple cuts in that sequence look great...
awesome video man. scenes are edited nicely, fits song perfectly.
brokencircuit 3 years ago
Love the black and white and the video cuts that follow the beats of the music. Great job! :o)
carrie04 3 years ago
Really good video, I like the somber tone in the beginning. The editing and pacing are also spot on. Keeping it and back and white was also a good idea. Nice job
DrewskiWannaBrewski 3 years ago
First of all, I think you did a really good job. The composition of the video was excellent. I agree that there should have been maybe a scene or two more about the bad relationship at the beginning. Overall though I think it was excellent. Good job!
RBingVCT268 3 years ago
Hey Ben,i enjoyed the video. Really strong ending and composition throughout. Good job
Eutzyrc 3 years ago
continuation...
also i really like the cuts to black with the drum beats. they turned out good.
i would have to say the best shot is emily walking down the hall and then cutting to a close up of her walking down the hall.
the knife stabbing scene also turned out great and i liked the montage of her behind the cheating bf, to the raised knife, to the stabbing. very taseful!
finally the fades of stabbing to kissing and back to stabbing were good and filled nicely.
A CINEMATIC MASTERPIECE!
crazyyy88s 3 years ago
okay...this is what i have to say
i think the beginning needed more footage of the bad relationship and plus the guy kept laughing cause hes a fag.
second i think the part where the guy is with the other girl looked better in sync with the beat of the song rather than words, but it was a good choice to keep it with words because thats how the rest of it was.
i like how the turntable scene worked out, i see how you kept it in sync with the beats. the triple cuts in that sequence look great...
crazyyy88s 3 years ago
wow i do not want to get on emily's bad side ben lol-great movie!
golfertk14 3 years ago