**Winner of the 2010 "Next Great Chef" Competition**
http://www.wastatefruit.com/
In this video, I explain step-by-step how to cook a Washington "stone fruit" salad, dressed in a fresh mint syrup. All "stone fruits" used in this recipe are carefully grown in the state of Washington, ensuring an outstanding quality of taste in the resulting dish.
Film work is awesome, as with all of your videos, however, I think your presentations style needs consideration. Your enunciation and vocal style are pretty good, but you seem to be over-emoting with your face, turning what seems like a nice piece into something of a caricature. Also, I feel that a bit of warm lighting to the right in the opening shot, as well as decreasing the brightness from the left would help the shot. I do like the creative way of drawing focus to the product however. Good
matbroomfield 10 months ago