All over the place with this one, but what's a track about being crazy worth if you don't fit the part....
Original video - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iuOeQqM4Y2s
Beat by Varyable.
Lyrics -
Wanna look at my demons, no better just stick to guardin your eyes
Don't give in to temptation, dont believe their fuckin lies
Promises of greater things, but nothing do hate they bring
Hear em sing, lovely sound, but fuck em, buck em, pop one in their dome so clean
It'll be ok one day, just keep doin the same
Same method expect different results, man that's fuckin insane
Procrastination, destination never gets near
Same exact location, steadily pacin, give in to the fear
Ponder, contemplate, reclean, wipe the slate
Knowin I'm growin but I'm slowin it down at the same time
Too big for my britches, I sew my skin in the seem line
The pain restrained so my brain tells me to love it
I refrain my scream so my aim won't miss the target
I pull the trigger regardless
Even when my eyes closed
Don't matter who I hit when I spit when the friends is foes
Down mothafuckas know
Cash in hand makes man insatiable
take take gimme gimme
fake fake bust the enemy
Demons and devils
Make me a martyr for the cause
Burn me at the stake
Give into your rage don't pause
Brutal man! i liked it. i listen to alot of fast rap, so the pauses were hard for me, i like those full line clean syllables. but the rhymes were nice. down a bit tho you missed 2 lines rhyming, you made inner rhymes which is dope but i woulda liked to see it all. preciate using the beat. ill post a link to your channel on the video!
remix696 7 months ago
@remix696 Appreciate the opinion, but I didn't miss anything ;). I just change line lengths, and I actually wrote this over about 6 different instrumentals so it forced flow changes every couple lines. It's just my style. I don't like being boxed in to ending when I'm 'supposed to'. But the beat was dope and I appreciate the cypher.
UnknownCrypt 7 months ago
One of your best that i've heard man, liked the flow on it. Good lyrics too
wasasa666 7 months ago
@wasasa666 Very dope man. Happy you dig it.
UnknownCrypt 7 months ago
@UnknownCrypt This may be second only to Unknown :P so this is def up there on your bests, your past couple have been good actually, maybe your finding your shit man, stoked to see some more in the future
wasasa666 7 months ago
@wasasa666 I'm way more patient lately. I used to just rush track after track for something to do and force a style. So I think just letting things come naturally without force is helping me actually create what I hear in my head.
UnknownCrypt 7 months ago