I think.Yeah,um lines.Change some of em,add some XDD
Riki *young pup*
Oof!
D-Don't you think I'm as good enough to be like you..?
I'm not a mistake!Momma says I'm not!
Momma,wake up,already!He called me a little mistake!
See?!I told you I'm not!
Yeah!Time to...huh?
Hey!Wait up!Leave some for me!I'm hungry too ya know!
Gimme that!
Oof!Grr..give it!
Darn...none left....grrrrr.....THAT WAS MY FOOD!
Come on,give it to me!I'm hungry!!
You theif!Give it back,NOW!!!!
AAHH!Ow!Don't eat that!
Its mine!
AAAAAHHH!Let me go!Your hurting me!!Ow!
Grrrrrrr...your gonna pay for stealing my food...
Huh?Who is he,momma?
Hey!Pick me,human!Come on!Over here!
What about me?!?!!?
H-H-H-Hey!Don't take him..!No!
Oh yeah!?Well,you won't take down Akakabuto!!
Riki(older pup)
Father!Is that you?
I knew it!The famous bear hound Shiro is my father!
GEE!Let me go!
Oof!Grrr....you giant peice of crap!
Oh,erm..ok.
AKAKABUTO!!!!
Zetsu Tenrou-Battoga!!!!!
Huu..?What attack?
Oh,the one I just used..?
I don't...really know.
M-M-Mother!
I saw my father.And I'm going to join his group.
Yes,I do,mother.And he's alive.
*crying*Goodbye,my dear mother.
Shiro:
Who are you kid?
No,it cannot be!I have no son!I don't have children!
Heiji!Stop your nonsence at once!
Hmm......you do look like me.But I don't have...huh?
Look out,Riki!Behind you!
Wha..?Wait,don't!
The Battoga?!W-W-W-W-W-Why did Riki use my attack?
Riki.Where did you learn that attack from?
Yamabuki:
No,your no mistake.
Well,Riki.The Male Human must pick one of the familys' pups in order to have a new hunting dog when his old one either dies or retires.
It's alright,children you will be chosen soon.
Your home at last!
What?Your father?Riki,you don't...
*crying*Go,my son.Be strong.I-I'll never forget you...
Riki's Sibling #1
Hahaha!Look at you,Riki!If that male human were here,he would fell soo bad for mother.Come on,be a little tougher if you wanna be cool,like us.
Your not.Your a little mistake.
Go ask her then,she'll say no.
Outta my way,runt!
Mine!
Aww..does the little crybaby want his food back?Huh?Well ya can't have it,its mine now,pipsqueak.
Ok,now your acting stupid.Take this!
See this is what happens when you mess with me and-huh?
The male human?!Hey pick me!I'm the strongest!!
Yes!I'm gonna take take down anything!See ya,losers!
Sibling #2
Heh,yeah.
He chose him and not me?!?
Honda:
Leader!Leader!Some stray kid wants to see you.
Don't worry,boy.Just go and talk to him.
No,sir.He says he's a stray,not a house dog.
But Shiro-sama!
Whoa!
Heiji:
Well,would you look at that.He's a bit small to be your son,Shiro-sama.
Brat!How dare you talk to The Leader like that!
Ok,you little neive brat.If you dare talk to Shiro-sama like that again,I'll soak the dirt with your blood,got it?
Yes,Leader..
Daisuke:
C'mon,you stupid trike!
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!
Ooof!
Gohei:
Hmm..yes yes.So these are Yamaboki's pups?
I pick the green-gray one.
Akakabuto:
RAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR!!
Heh!I didn't know you had a little brat,Shiro!
Gerrrrrrrrrerrrr....I will be back.To kill you all!
Random Dog #1
Are you Shiro?The Leader of Ohu?
Y-Yes..
No,my family was captured and killed by humans.I have come alone.
Oh,no....
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Random Dog#2
Hey,you puny brat!
Why the heck are you here?This is my territory.
Men!Kill this little jerk now!
W-W-W-What skill he has in battle..!
I still won't let him live.
Back away,men,I'll kill him myself!
DIE,YOU FREAKING LITTLE PEICE OF CRAP!!!!
Random Dog 3#
Yes,Boss!
Random Dog 4#
Shiro-sama!Riki-san!
It's Yamabuki...she's....
....dead.
I'm so sorry,Leader.And for you too,Riki.
Random Dog 5
Leader!!You and your son get out of here!Akakabuto will kill you if you don't!
I'll stay and fight!
Young Shiro:
Father...!We have no chance against Akakabuto!We have to leave!
No!Don't...!
FATHER!!!!!!!!!NOOOOOOOO!!!
F-F-F-F-Father..?!Are you....o-ok..?
Father!No,Father!You can't leave me father!!
Y-Y-Yes...I am now Shiro-sama...I understand...
Shiro's Father:
Dammit,Shiro!You always give up!There is no way that YOU could be the next leader!
I take care of it!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
S-S-S-Shiro.......Shiro......*cough*listen to me,Shiro......you are now the leader of Ohu,Akakabuto might not have been beaten,but he will....g-goodbye,Shiro-s-sam-a......
Can I try out?
WeedaSan22 2 years ago
Im sorry,but this series is canceled D: but you guys can audition for my GDW Redub!
CocoaTheWolf 2 years ago
oh ok! Thanks!
WeedaSan22 2 years ago
np ^^
CocoaTheWolf 2 years ago
I want to be Riki.
Bakugan446573 2 years ago
k thanx :D
CocoaTheWolf 2 years ago