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A Jonas Brothers Love Story(caught between 2 loves)ch28part2

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Uploaded by on Aug 8, 2008

sorry 4 the delay i noe i posted a lil late but i was busy sorry.anywayz enjoy xD


Part2

Rachel: *turns around* Kevin! *kisses him* wait...why aren't you guys on tour?
Nick: well our first concert is not for 2 days
Joe: yea and we wanted to celebrate our best friends birthday
Kevin: so our parents agreed to throw you a surprise party and invited all your friends
Rachel: aww thanks guys *she hugs them*
Frankie: come on let's get this party started!*puts the music on*
*everyone laughs*
(*as everyone started dancing and having fun Rachel realized that all her friends and family were there. Main People who were there: Brianna, Angela, Emilia, Kevin, Joe, Nick, Carmen, Eric, her brother Noel, her sister Aaliyah, her cousins Joshua and Matthew, and Mr. and Mrs. Jonas.(there were A LOT of other people but they're not really important. lolz)
*While everyone was dancing and having fun eating cake etc. Kevin was sitting on the couch and Rachel was sitting on his lap. She had her hands around his neck and laid her head on his chest*
Rachel: *eyes closed* Kevin, thank you so much. You're the best
Kevin: *kisses her forehead*
*just then Carmen walks by and she winks at Kevin but Rachel does not see because her eyes are still closed. Kevin feels really awkward*

*30 minutes later*
Kevin: Nick, you remember that shirt I was looking for?
Nick:*nervous* yea...
Kevin: I found it
Nick: ya don't say...
Kevin: yea guess where
Nick: *nervous* w-where Kev?
Kevin: your room
Nick: *acts guilty* psh, do you really think that I took it...
Kevin: *glares at him*
Nick: ok, fine I did take it gosh. How did you know anyway
Kevin: well a couple weeks ago I noticed that I was missing a lot of stuff so I put a video camera in there to see whose been sneaking in my room
Nick: it wasn't only me it was Joe to!
Kevin: yea I know. But just to let you know I'm not an idiot. So don't thin you can get away with that again *smiles and walks away*
Nick: *went over to Brianna and started dancing. All of a sudden he realized something* oh my god!
Brianna: nick, what's wrong?!
Nick: *talks fast* can't explain now. Just go get Joe and Angela and meet me up stairs now!
Brianna: ok *she goes to find them and nick runs upstairs*
Nick was in Kevin's room when Angela Joe and Brianna ran in
Joe: Nick, what the emergency!
Nick: ok guys listen. *closes the door* ok about a week ago me and Brianna saw Carmen and Kevin making out in here
Angela: *angry* somebody needs to hold me back cause I'm bout 2 get that girl
Joe: *grabs Angela* whoa Ang, chill
Angela: I don't believe this how could she do that!
Joe: I know right! I can't believe Kevin either. Rachel doesn't deserve that.
Nick: guys, this is even worst. When it happed the whole thing was video taped
Joe: what?! How?! Are you sure?! How do you know?!
Nick: yes I am sure. Kevin told me that he put a video camera in his room a long time ago because he wanted to know which one of us was sneaking into his room. But I guess he forgot that it was recording when he was with Carmen.
Joe: let's see it
Brianna: no, not now. Everyone is going to want to know what we're doing in here
Nick: true *opens door and they walk into the hallway* guys just remember. Rachel can NEVER see this
Rachel: *standing behind them* Rachel can never see what?
Joe, Angela, Brianna, Nick: uh..........


(uh oh.do you think rachel will fianlly find out?!

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  • AHHHHHHHHHHHH!! NOOO! RACHEL! GO AWAY! AGH! haha my name's rachael too! i would love to date a jo bro! haha i know random! back to the story. OMG!!!!! AHHHH!!

  • haha yea lol ive posted that alot 2!

  • haha yeah i feel the same way... my names brianna too. lol but ive posted that like 50 times on her videos. lol

  • aaaah i hadnt even been reading yours and i was like im missing a story lol but wow haha didnt see that coming

  • Oooh is the song predicting what is going to happen in the story? Lol very dramatic!

  • this is intense! but i really like it!!!

  • OH BOY!!!!

    now what excuse they gonna tell Rachel

    i need the next chapter pleaseeeeeeeeeee

  • put the next one up, hurry!

  • uh oh NICE GOING NICK!

    I still love you but say it to the whole world why don't you lol. Please PUt THE NEXT ONE UP SOON! addictid to these things.

  • UH OH! Please don't let her find out!

    At least not on her birthday!

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