This is a song/poem that i'm working on for my live performances. I had to submit a song for a documentary that i'm involved with at the moment and I thought this would be a perfect way of getting some feedback on a new song idea. . . it's a little rusty in places and the audio is not edited in any way shape or form.
here are the lyrics
I've gotta do something
About where we're going to
Coz any fool can see you're glowing
Coz I can't be with you
Oh tonight will be our last time
Your eyes
They water
As I lay down the rules
You scream 'Don't bother, coz I never loved you
Oh tonight will be our last time
Very good indeed ! your guitar playing has really come on. Nice video editing as well.
SPACEFACE70 4 months ago