This is another song I've been working on. It's obviously still missing a lot, but I wanted to post some of my progress on it so far.
Lyrics:
V1
I can't take this anymore
the last thing I saw was you as you walked out the door
as I lay here broken in my bed
with all these tortured feelings running through my head
I just called to let you know that
I'm all for letting go
Chorus:
this is the end
never knew you, my friend
gone and left me so jaded
left to sit here and hate this
try to make a new start
but it's all falling apart
this time I know that it's over
when it's all said and done
when it's all said and done
V2
Can't see how it all rings true
now with every passing thought it all comes back to you
and all the times I'd wished they'd take me too
knowing there was nothing left that you or I could do
I looked into your eyes
and I saw straight through your lies
V3
sick and tired but I cannot stay
as I'm drifting farther from my conscience every day
so much left that I couldn't say
'cause I'm waiting for the end to take it all away
broken beaten and confused
closer now thoughts turn to you
Like this one too, very catchy. Good example that recording quality doesn't matter if it's a good song.
MrStevenpyn 2 months ago