Not bad, some great poses in here, but I'd say there might be a bit too much going on. Viewing it, I found it somewhat overwhelming. Also, while off-centre lip sync can be great for character, it doesn't seem to suit this scene, and the lip sync is a bit off.
Not bad at all! You move between poses really well. Couple of pointers, try to avoid the "W Pose" (When she says "no fire") as it's symmetrical and there's always a more interesting alternative. Make sure there's always a reason for a pose. You might also want to work on the lip sync as it seems a bit out. Apart from that, awesome job!
Not bad, some great poses in here, but I'd say there might be a bit too much going on. Viewing it, I found it somewhat overwhelming. Also, while off-centre lip sync can be great for character, it doesn't seem to suit this scene, and the lip sync is a bit off.
Pirateguybrush 3 years ago
Not bad at all! You move between poses really well. Couple of pointers, try to avoid the "W Pose" (When she says "no fire") as it's symmetrical and there's always a more interesting alternative. Make sure there's always a reason for a pose. You might also want to work on the lip sync as it seems a bit out. Apart from that, awesome job!
sjtaylor84 3 years ago