Sleave - Who Dat

This is my first track. I'm spittin' off of J. Cole's "Who Dat" instrumental.

Lyrics:
(Hook)
Who Dat who dat bitch I spit that flame
Who dat who dat bitch I spit that flame
Who dat who dat bitch I spit that flame
So don't worry bout my mothafuckin' name

(Verse 1
It was all good just a week ago
I spit that type of flame, that could head the snow
I'm running game on all these stupid hoes
I'm just lookin' for brain I aint tryna get any deeper tho
What I been through, no one fuckin' knows
Fuck venting my problems yall don't need to know
I'm hot (yo) so I'm out proving it, doing my part (huh!) so I'm out doin' it
Like I'm having raw sex outside I'm out doin' it
No glove, partying with my people that dont showed up
Fuck it man it's all love, fuckin homo-thugs
That's why ya boy is rising above
I'm spittin' real shit, I'm on some real shit
My fuckin groove (uh) you gotta feel it
I'm spittin illness I'm on the ill list. Fuck it imma just let the mothafuckin' beat hit

(Hook)
(Verse 2)
I'm here homie for verse 2
Yall rappers is not sick, yall need labels to nurse you
Like Que (uh) homie I took the juice
Yall Acute Angles, me I'm something like Obtuse
I'm fucked up in the head, I gotta few screws that's loose
Yall lames is bench players, I'm the one that shoots
Fly up in the air like a parachute
Yall more like parasites, yall rhymes is dry as rice
Like a elderly man (uh) ya boy is fuckin' nice
Lines is ill like a nigga having a thing for dikes
No one hit wonder, I hit yall with one then I make yall wonder
When my next single is gonna be commin'
Dont worry like my bitches they gonna be cummin'
How is he so young and so ill?
No butt pads or silicones he keeps it soooo real

(hook)

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[Certifed74]

@itzFundamental Thanks alot for the feedback man it's heavil appreciate it. And yeah I'm tryna keep it to the lyrical roots.

Haha I like the way you put those lines together, Imma definitely start putting in more time in tweaking my verses, If I delivered it like that it that would had been mad hot. Good lookin' on the feedback again man, keep in touch

[itzFundamental]

yo i was feelin it man.

appreciate the fact that ur stayin true to the art form.

keep spittin. work on the flow just a little.

"Lines is ill like a nigga having a thing for dikes

No one hit wonder" yo you couldve had nice wordplay right there if you woulda said "like a nigga havin a thing for dikes, NO ONE HIT wonder" cuz dudes cant fuck dikes cuz dikes dont like dudes. so NO ONE HITS it hahaha