Die Verzweiflung - Nathaniel Carter

My first attempt at a poem in German. Let me know what you think, especially you native German speakers.

English:

Despair has dominated my days, dreaming of a time when i see your face, this is but a tragedy in the making, caress upon caress in only this the tortured realm of imagining. Let me break free of such bonds, chase away the demons in my soul, strike out upon the plains, and find your shining face so hidden in the distance.

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