Dusk- See Without Eyes

I sortof re-did it and took a bit more time with it.

Lyrics
There's a sight for these sore eyes within you
Impending, A certainty
There's a foreward thats wrtitten across your face
I know

Intentional trips in the wire
Undone
With every regal rejection
I have become

I wish you were near me
I wish I could talk without words
Cause I know this feeling could
Bleed out and never be heard

Never be heard
Never be heard

Since when were we shifted, drifting apart
I wont waste a moment
Since time wore a hole straight on back to the start
Oh no

An eyelash away from a flurry of hate
Growing
And all I could wish for behind your embrace
Ive made these mistakes

I wish you were near me
I wish you could see without eyes
To riddle the openings
See through and tear my disguise

Tear through my disguise
Tear through my disguise

A harlequin dance on the edge of a blade
The scar tissue etched on the plans that we made
And now all we have is the shattered remains of a
Love once golden

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Dusk
• composition
• piano
• depressing

[TheSammySpectacular]

Did you write this? This is beautiful

[Monkeyl0rd22]

@TheSammySpectacular Yes I did and thankyou :)

[XxDeathlyTearsxX]

You're such a great writer.

[jesusfeets]

Got really confused as to why this had appeared so high up my sub box. Listening to it now, I'm glad it was :)

[SiEVlla521]

You just transformed my favorite song in the whole wide world and made it even more amazing the lyric change at the end was really nice and love the strings incorporated into the song, keep doing what your doing cause its amazing :)

[Gemma6348]

I didn't think it was possible for you to improve this , it was already so amazing in the first place, but I was wrong it is now even better , with everything you do you get better and better and i don't know how. I love you forever xxxxxxxxx