War In northern Ireland. Pt1 Civil rights movment - conflict

The First Part of a number of Planned Videos About the troubles.
I had to break them into Sections because it would be way too long to have them all together.
The music is ''Four Green Fields'' By tommy Makeam (R.I.P)
This is done from the perspective of an Irish Republican (trying to be unbiased).
This goes from the Civil rights movement to what is seen as the start of the war, the battle of the bogside.

RULES*****
Please do not comment unless you have some senseable critisism or somthing positive to say.

Category:

News & Politics

Tags:

• civil
• rights
• ireland
• celts
• irish
• freedom
• war
• IRA
• rira
• cire
• socialism
• fighting
• shooting
• peace

[dannypk1]

2:13 - Police entered his home and 'severly beat him to death'. Hmmm, is there any way of beating someone to death which isnt 'severe'...

[Thuglordrpt]

Theres hitting him once and killing him instantly, and theres bashing him to pieaces and letting him die after days in agony in hospital. I hope that makes it a bit clearer for you to sort out in your head.

[finnywinny123123]

Whats with the shit spelling.

[Thuglordrpt]

im a fast typer, make alot of mistakes, dident think ppl would take much notice, but was wrong lol

[belfastorbust]

In reality Protestants were as badly off as their RC neighbours but Protestants put up with it as to get rid of the Stormont regime would be disasterous for them (or so they were told) They were also too blinded by loyalty. There were many Protestants involved with The Civil Rights Movement at the start (founded by Ivan Cooper, A Protestant) but many were disillusioned when Apprentice Boy parades became targets. I just think when your potraying the past that you shouldn't airbrush things out.

[BlackIrish1916]

theres no power stronger than will power!!!

[JLAEBB]

@JohnnyHeneghan09

I don't follow religion. And look, I am actually in favour of the IRA so don't get me into that, and the reason to why they took Ireland was because they wanted more profit, not because of religion.

[JohnnyHeneghan09]

@JLAEBB oh yeah its the sme religeon yet they still had to come to ireland nd take our land 4 no reason explain that u protestand prick

[ck260594]

@thuglordrpt thank for making this video. it really help me in my social studies.=)

[JLAEBB]

@Spartan0King

It's the same fucking religion

[Spartan0King]

bastard protestants

[joezep37]

@zeberdee1972 u'r wrong

[dannypk1]

All in all the above seems well put together, im merely pointing out that the sentence seems very awkward and unduly subjective, so maybe consider rephrasing that.