Children's Story
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God...I could listen to Tom Waits read the dictionary and it would be beautiful.
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oh my
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In drama we are reading the play Woyzeck and this story is in it!
I nearly jumped out my seat when I realized!
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the chuckle at the end is a huge part of the magic of this piece. I'm so glad I don't think like you. he's laughing at the idea of giving a very young child a taste of harsh reality as opposed to a fairytale. and that's a funny idea you humourless get.
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when i first heard this with my friend today, we laughed, but this video made it a lot more than black humor for me, and so much more poignant, thanks, great video man.
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I think this is more inspired by The Giving Tree.
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This is sad
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He talks and aks like da joker good story by da way
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@Herebebears I always considered "There's your story. Night Night" as an effective ending. The chuckle was just an extra.
I don't hear the chuckle as "heh heh, just kidding" at all. To the contrary, I hear it as "Pester me for a bedtime story, will ya?...Now try to have a good night's sleep after that, ya little shit!". To me that's much more powerful and dark and sinister (and 'Waits-ian') than "THERE'S your fucking story. Full stop." Again, I wish the other animations on Youtube that did leave in the punchline (Yes, PUNCHLINE!) were as good as yours! ;-)
Herebebears 3 years ago
i understand and respect your point.
Having said that, I disagree, and were I to do the whole thing over I'd still leave out the chuckle.
Thank you, however, for taking the time and effort to explain your position to me.
katmaidog 3 years ago
Nothing 3rd rate about the video...it's beautiful...It's just that, the chuckle doesn't distract...The chuckle is the punchline without which there is no joke.
Beautiful interpretation...lousy editing...
Herebebears 3 years ago
Sorry, to me the chuckle distracts, and since I was doing a little creating I exercised some creative license and left it out.
On purpose.
I don't think of the laugh as a punchline at all. I think it diminishes the punch of darkness the story contains, *as I see it*.
It's like, "Heh heh, just kidding."
Without it it's like, "THERE'S your fucking story. Full stop."
There's nothing nice or soft about this tale and the warmth of a human laugh at the end distracts from that, to ME.
katmaidog 3 years ago 4