Paper Dreams (Original Song)

I'm not a good guitar player but I wrote this song a couple of months ago on my guitar...
I'm not a great english writer either... So if you are an author who somehow like my work please contact me ;) I promise I'll take my piano this time. Happy new year. I'll see you soon.

Here are the lyrics :

I'll draw the shape of your eyes
In my paper dreams
All your smiles remain so hard ... to leave

I'll catch the shape of your skin
In my luxuries
We're done but I'm still blind... Girl

Give me your hand I'm drowning... to you

Bridge

I guess the warmth of my chest
Won't call your name again
I'll stay in a jail of pain
I need a key to rest


Chorus
So I'll try something new... I promise
We shared the same tears, just like blood in our minds
And there's still love in my town
There's Love in my home
And I don't know how to say goodbye


I'll hear the tones of your voice
In my silences
Take a last glance at my past...passed girl

I'll keep the shape of my crimes
In my jealousy
If you don't shoot I will die... girl

bridge + Chorus

So this is good bye

Category:

Music

Tags:

• paper
• dreams
• guitar
• original
• song
• the
• shape
• of
• your
• eyes
• decruyenaere
• julien
• acoustic

[lynchheiman]

I really like this progression, the musicality has a nice melody keep at it buddy.

[Jusongs]

I'm really glad you liked it Lynchheiman. Thanx a lot for your kind words. I was already loving australia. I am loving it a little bit more since your comment :)

[spencerst]

so bad mate !!!! lyrics maybe ok but you cant sing !!

[Jusongs]

You must be right, thanx for the tip spencerst.

[nanoniss]

toujours et encore la même chose juste magnifique

[gkjmb]

I love the guitar part and the lyrics! The only thing I could say is that I don't like the melody. Try something that would be easy to sing a long with. For other people who want to sing a long. It's really low your voice right now, try to make it higher.

[five4three2one0]

he looks like a guy i see that worked at the mcdee drive through

get rid of the collared t-

at least let it be a collared long sleeve ew

[lynchheiman]

so hows the song going anybody picked it up. I would suggest you grab yourself some lessons on strengthening the midrange part of your voice and some vibrato ..gotta make it sound thick.

[miamiwinter]

What are the chords you're playing? I have someone here who wants to sing this as a video response to your post. :-)

[inntheshire2010]

very nice....almost made me cry..sheesh!

[GrannyGreyHair]

Maybe if you got someone with the right voice to sing this. I like the melody, but your voice doesnt go too well. Just being honest here - not trying to be mean.

Its a nice melody. You shold be proud.

[KissingPL]

its not bad he isnt right