DB: Demon Swords Episode 1: Solar and Lunar Battle

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[Spralwers]

pretty cool concepts, especially the solar warrior. not sure if youve done more fics and have fixed this, but theres alot of places with grammar errors, spelling errors, dialogue appearing for too short of a time and sequences where one character is in one place and then suddenly the next and it ruins just the overall flow of the fanfic

[arshiaey]

@Spralwers Thanks Spralwers. I think that is fixed in the Next Episode. And yes I have done more Fics. I am not good at english so I am Trying my best with Grammar.

[babysal23]

@arshiaey ive notice evry thing dr gero makes betrays him

[arshiaey]

@babysal23 That's just a coincidence, Gero's not even in this fic.

[Giovanni123456789101]

You have to edit your fight scene more intense.Just keep it up!!!

4/5...

[arshiaey]

I know I need to edit. Wait until an actual Fight Scene.

[DBBurningBlast]

nice series i subbed

[Firemalleoandjelly]

everything dr gero creates can't help but kill him

[arshiaey]

Thanks Guys.

[ssj2unlimited]

Pretty Good! I liked The Story Concept and the things with Lunar and Solar Warriors. Very original! Your best yet!