1.) Switch up the camera angles when their talking at the end. Maybe an angled profile of Wolvie to the same of Bats, then both together for "Let's finish this guy."
2.) Add some more dialogue. Since it's a trailer, we should learn the plot a bit more.
3.) Work on the fight scenes a bit. Choreography seemed a bit slow.
Other than those bits, not a bad trailer. Oh, and change the font for the title. You can find sites to download Batman and Wolverine/X-Men fonts if that's your prerogative.
A little sped up from last time, so it is even more awesome. Does Elektra speak at all? And there's one guy that just looks imposing (he knows who he is).
interesting concept, costumes could be better, but your effort makes me over look that decent job.
0jacknapier0 3 years ago
1.) Switch up the camera angles when their talking at the end. Maybe an angled profile of Wolvie to the same of Bats, then both together for "Let's finish this guy."
2.) Add some more dialogue. Since it's a trailer, we should learn the plot a bit more.
3.) Work on the fight scenes a bit. Choreography seemed a bit slow.
Other than those bits, not a bad trailer. Oh, and change the font for the title. You can find sites to download Batman and Wolverine/X-Men fonts if that's your prerogative.
HomeSqueezed 3 years ago
Looks pretty interesting,it'd make a great comic book.
Dunes 4 years ago
that actually looks interesting
courtjester88 4 years ago
Looks great, cannot wait to see it.
PhelpDogg 4 years ago
A little sped up from last time, so it is even more awesome. Does Elektra speak at all? And there's one guy that just looks imposing (he knows who he is).
badmintonjedi 4 years ago