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Uploaded by on Jan 9, 2010

So, this is the first episode of my new series
So if tell me if you like it.

Demi was sitting on the bathroom floor. Bottle in one hand and blood dripping down the other. She looks down at her wrist and takes another sip out of the bottle. She tries to get up and stumbles while doing so. She help on to the sink and she walked over to the door. She opened the door and kept stumbling across the room until she reached the bed and past out.

(( Demis p.o.v. ))

So, I woke up this morning and it felt like someone was hitting me in the head with a hammer. God how I hate hangovers. But whatever, ive gotten used to them. Its like a daily routine. I wake up, go to school for like an hour, then skip the rest of the day to drink. Then I pass out around 9 and do the same thing all over again the next day.

(( normal p.o.v. ))
The next day demi fumbles into class late, she sneaks to the back of the room, falls into her, and passes out.

Nick: *pokes demis arm*
Demi: *lifts her head up* cannn I help you?
Nick: demi, are you drunk?
Demi: psshhh, noooo.
Nick: yes, you are.
Demi: no, now leave me alone, * gets up and stumbles to the desk in seats in front of her and passes out again*

The bell rings and demi is still passed out. Nick walks over to her desks and helps her up. He puts her arms around his shoulder and walks her to his car. He lays her down in the back seat and drives to her house. She eventually wakes up and sees nick sitting beside her.

Demi: nick? What are you doing here?
Nick: well you passed out during class, and I didnt want to leave you there so I brought you home.
Demi: umm, well thanks, I guess.
Nick: so, why do you drink?
Demi: to erase everything.
Nick: what do you mean?
Demi: its just that ive been through a lot of stuff the past years, and when I drink, it all goes away.
Nick: same with me, its just that I dont drink, I get high.
Demi: what have you been through exactly?
Nick: Ill tell you my story if you tell me yours.
Demi: alrightt, you got yourself a deal.


Yea, so its not great, but first episode usually arent but it will get better, I promise.
So comment please.
4 comments till the next one.

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  • i love it ...intense...next epi. plz.

    :)*n3mi fOr3v3r*<3

  • I luuved it ! make the next one? please and soon!

  • nice episode

  • Awesome(:

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