Calling - USC "Alphies" Entry

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Uploaded by on Sep 26, 2011

Made for a freshman film competition at the University of Southern California.

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  • That was really good. I think it would have been a bit better had the female had a bit more emotion in her voice, but overall, very very good.

  • @MattAlan01 Thanks! Yeah, I tend to go for understatement (or sometimes ridiculous overstatement), so I told her to keep it toned down. I suppose it's a stylistic thing, but I definitely see where you're coming from.

  • This was brilliantly shot and had great promise but it just ended too soon. We weren't able to view it as a story. Did they find something amazing? Where is he going now? Do we learn more about his sister? All these are questions I feel needed answering to do this film justice. I appreciate that some films go unanswered in films but in this one, more went un answered than were answered. I think, with a little more substance, this could be a very very very good short film of about 3-4 minutes!

  • @samthomsa Thanks for the constructive criticism! Unfortunately, the film had to be no more than two minutes + credits in order to fit the requirements of the contest. A lot of what you said hadn't occurred to me, though. Great points; I would love to develop this further.

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  • Excellent.

  • valiant effort, great music, lovely visuals, nice story, and so in tune with what I am experiencing right now

  • Simple and inspiring and deep. Really nicely done. Freshman? Such promise. Good work!

  • Great job! I hope the home-video footage is legal...

  • Nice. I thought the acting was worked fine. Not too emotional. I also agree with the comments made my samthomsa.

  • @SundogPictures Well it isn't like it ruined it, I just thought it would be more emotional that way haha.

  • whoaa this is really good!

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