Miku's "秋の空" with English Lyric

My translation on "Autumn/al sky" with a bit of fix.

-"暮れていく白い月"をGoing into Twilight/White moonと訳してましたが、イメージが浮かべにくいと思い直してWhite moon... Going into twilightにしました。他「夢の中では」あたりの表現を微修正しました。

[ Orignal title in NICO VID ]
【初音ミク オリジナル】 秋の空
([Miku Hatsune Original] Autumn/al sky)

[Original vid URL]
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm2045384

[MP3 uploaded by actual author]
http://reddustrec.net/audio/akinosora.mp3

[Creator]
Music by wintermute
Lyric by wintermute
Vocal by Vocaloid "Miku Hatsune"

[Note on Lyric]
歌詞タイトルだけ"Autumn/al sky"に訳したのは、秋に限定することなく全季節で聞ける曲だと思ってほしいと考えたからです。本当はAutumn skyでいいと思います。。。蛇足だったらすいません。
(Autumnal skyはたぶん日常で秋空のような気候のときに「今日は秋空のようだね」というような使い方します。自分は使ったことないのであくまで たぶんなんですが)

「夢」はカフェでうたた寝したのだろうと考えて(day-)dream、白昼夢と訳しました。

[Who's Miku(the girl in vid)?]
http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=CF0A0I6cqmI

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[How to get mp3 and Japanese lyric readable in Eng(Romaji)]
http://www.eonet.ne.jp/~soundares/subs/getmp3.html
http://www.eonet.ne.jp/~soundares/subs/getromaji.html

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Miku H's "Autumn/al sky" Lyric
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From my narrow(small) room I jumped(dashed) out...(That) morning
I'm going to the city No aims though
My usual cafe There's too many people
It irritates me My tea won't come either

Autumn sky
Too far it's out of reach

I could go anywhere (in this world)
That I used to believe Though a lie
I still see piece of my dream (now)
I want to go after it... if I will fall (anyway)

Time passes and changes into sand
Your aspect (Now) I can't recall so
I will look (straight) ahead
That I have decided though
Inside (day-)dream that didn't work either

Autumn sky
Going into twilight White moon

"Everything will change from tomorrow"
That I used to believe Though a lie
My arms know it
It's/I'm feeling only piercing/pulsating pain

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[BIiere]

Miku looks like she's planning to do something very sinackle with that leek O.o'

Great song...wonder why it does'nt have more veiws?