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Uploaded by on Jun 15, 2008

I don't really know if lots of people post poems and stuff here..
But oh well.
I don't care if you hate it.
In fact...
tell me :)
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poem here...in case it ends up blurry...
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She feels dizzy
But no pain.
Her heart is racing.
But she can't feel a thing.

The blood drips
From her wrists to the floor.
She begins to stumble.
You reach the door.

Walking inside.
You see her bleeding.
You want to help.
But she denies.

Saying:
Don't save me.
I want to die.

You can't believe
The words she just spoke.
But you walk away.
Hurt.

You return.
She's still alive.
You could help her.
But she cries.

I still don't want you.
I never did.
Now leave me be.
I'm better off dead.

You leave again.
Tears in your eyes.
You loved her.
And you were letting her die.

An hour later
You walk back in
She's lying on her bed.

Eyes staring blankly..
She watches you.
You could have saved me
If you wanted to.
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song is Forced to Die
by As i lay Dying.

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  • fucking epic i am in love with it

  • that was nice it was scary lol i thou it was going to be a nice poem :( lol o well i dont think i will sleep 2night lol

  • Great

    I loved it

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