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Dynamite [Jonas Brothers Story] CH 28 "Get Out Of My Shower"

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Uploaded by on Nov 26, 2009

WOAH, 28 chapters already?! Feels like I've only just started o.o Well big exams are outta the way for now so its all good, I have more time to post hopefully a little more often ^^ Didn't get my five comments on the last one though :(

Chapter 28
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I turned around to change the temperature and after that single moment something slithered around my waist in a disgustingly surreal fashion. Before I knew it I spun myself around in shock. I could feel the horror in my expression. My heart was already pounding as I backed up to the wall in fear.

"W-what are y-you do-" The hands around my waist had cupped around my face as he motioned forwards a split second after I'd frightfully pulled myself aback as far as I could. His lips had crashed down on mine. They were begging me for a response. My eyes panned out wider than they've ever been before. I grabbed a hold of his wrists, trying to pull them away. I thought it had worked but instead he just pulled me in and held me tight against his naked body with his arms wrapped around my back. By now we were both soaked. Mechanically my own lips began to move against his. I was enjoying it for, well, I haven't a clue on Earth.

He slid his tongue into my mouth. The sensation was addicting, like a drug some would say. My arms hesitated as they reached up to wrap around his neck. I know it was probably impossible but I felt as though I needed to be closer to him. He pulled away from the kiss, leaving me with my eyes closed. His lips pressed against my neck, sucking on it it certain places. I bit my lip tight to stifle a moan and rested my forehead on his left shoulder whilst he continued to experiment with the left side of my neck.

Just then some sense knocked into me when I realised the scolding water was still running...I realised what was happening. I pulled back as soon as I felt him smirk against my skin, gripping his shoulders to hopefully push him away. He looked me in the eyes with a supposedly confused expression.
"G-get out!" I whispered harshly, etching forwards slightly because of the hot water. He lifted an arm and turned the temperature down so it was just warm as he replied to me with a smirk.

"No, what's mine is yours...remember?"
"I didn't mea-" He cut me off again by kissing me forcefully. Automatically my hands ran through his hair and I deepened the kiss. He'd quickly closed up the space between us both. A hand ran over my behind, pulling my leg above his waist. His other hand tapped spots just before my area irritatingly enough. In all honesty I was so up for this. Nobody was home for ages yet either, but I actually wasn't all that sure about what would happen.

His finger slid inside of me, causing me to pull away from the kiss and gasp. He chuckled lightly at my reaction and started to swirl the phalange seemingly effortlessly there. Immediatly I started to squirm at the physical unfamiliarity and let out a squeal, quickly followed by a moan. I wanted it to stop but at the same time it felt so good. He added another and pulled it back and forth with a regular, slow and tormenting pace. I whimpered slightly, this time pressing my lips to his. He lifted my other leg up so my feet were no longer on the floor of the shower.

"I make them good girls go bad" The chorus was blasting through the MP3 speakers freely as he was about to enter me.
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BADABOOM :) if you like this story then comment please, you'd get more chapters and faster!

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  • really liked this onee :)

    lol love the song relation bit :P

    you deserve so much more subscribers you're amazing :D lyx

  • Meh, I don't think so :P I'm pretty happy w/ what I've got tbh, lost a sub anyways :L But I think they might've left YT

  • Mwahahaha.

    Kay, I commented. Now everyone else has to. (:

    Jesus, your writing is fucking amazing. No joke. I mean, not just the plot. Not that the plot isn't good, because it definitely is. But your literary style and everything is publishing-worthy. (:

  • :O holy crap that means a lot coming from you, but you need to print off one of your chapters and stick it in the mirror and say that :D

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  • more....please :)

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  • aaaaawesome! go on plz, it's been too long! how were your exams btw?

  • Bleeehh. xP

  • i lost one too x) :L and good :) x

  • QUICK MOREE!!!!

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