Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 8. Development)

Here is one way the song could go from here, with some production, some live instruments, lots of stuff added to it.

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[jesusofsuburbia44]

amazing!! you did 60% of the song!! you rock!!

[taylor2d2]

thanks, but i really didnt do that much.

I played all the instruments, but i only "wrote" like 20%

[raistarr]

congrates dude!!! is it just the same chords as the verse or is a different chords for the bridge???

[taylor2d2]

honestly, I played the bridge differently on the 2 guitars... they're just octaves, so I dont know the names of the chords... different from the verse though.

[taylor2d2]

almost ready with the reworked chorus / new version... but I'm thinkin... video this time instead of just a picture :)

[Spineroony]

Before the first chorus, did you try to add a pick slide? It would sound sweet right before the chorus. Try this chord progression change:

Eb Eb/D Cm

Let the music play.

Ab Bb Eb

Let the rockers roll. Eb Eb/D Cm

I don't care what you say. Ab Bb Eb

We're turning up the rad-io.

It's very simple chord progression, but it works with the lyrics. Keep what you got just add a rhythm guitar to play those chords to see if it blends with what you got.

[taylor2d2]

wow, thats really detailed feedback, thanks!

pick slides make everything better.

[euryswesson]

waw ur good, @__@

[uktah]

he chose u!!

[ddifulco]

Nice job man. You really gave the song some depth.

[lazrpo1nt3r]

You didn't only "write" 20% of it, you provided the backing track and the main order for all of the steps after 8. Without you, we'd only have ATS's loop and the magic of "cut n' paste." It seems more like you actually put this song into a direction rather than a pool of ideas that just come together as we go.

[skarefamena]

Nicely done.

[raistarr]

lol ok congrates