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Uploaded by on May 4, 2008

Need help with this one. I feel like something is missing. I don't want to have too much distracting from the message but I think it needs one more element. What is it?

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  • I would put some - a touch more space between If I , and I would like to hear the street music of daily traffic/life a bit louder in back ground, it is to faint.... Otherwise I really like how the main word frames stay and the other words pop in and out and unfold the poem! Great job Adrian!

  • That's funny. Jackie told me the same thing about the "If I" and I forgot to do it before sending it to YouTube. Thanks for reminding me. I just fixed it.

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  • That was a beautiful vid, nothing to be change in it.

    And the street and children sound.... JUST LOVELY

    JESUS IS LORD!

  • Interesting point. I didn't consider that.

  • Well, the problem is that the entire poem is in the first person, Christ speaking. To suddenly switch to second person seems disjunctive. Maybe others will think it works; after all, your goal is to reach people, and you already 'have' me. :)

  • How about this at the end of the video, "What do you call Him?" Is that too confrontational?

  • POWERFUL WORDS! Can Add also "Ye call me GOD, but Worship me Not".

    Keep-up the Good works of the Lord.

  • Yeah, "written long ago". Maybe no question at the end or, "What would He say to me today?" allusion to WWJD. It's WWJT in my webpages, What Word Jesus Thought, What Would Jesus Think, but WWJD is better known.

    The "to me" makes it personal?

    Hence your videos are powerful, since you Just Focus On The Word Itself. When seeing this one, I think of 1Jn1-2:5, 4:12-17 & John 15.:)

  • WOW!

  • Opps - skip the making the back ground music louder, still waking up here as my volume was down lower then usually.. O'vie - skip that part...

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