One Less Lonely Girl: Part 2

Loading...

Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon
Upgrade to the latest Flash Player for improved playback performance. Upgrade now or more info.
2,986
Loading...
Alert icon
Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon

Uploaded by on Nov 6, 2009

New part! Yayness. I wrote this part, and if I get at least 15+ comments, I'll upload Naureen's part later tonight. Please & Thank You.

ALSO: Follow my twitter (if you want):
http://www.twitter.com/KayPeaAych

Love, Paige
______________________

"I can't believe we're actually here," Melissa screeches, her smile stretching across her face. New York City was a lot more crowded than I had initially expected. The streets are filled with millions of yellow taxis and cars. The buildings swarm every inch of the city. Neon lights were the only things lighting up the entire area.

"I know it's amazing." Melissa is marveling at the city, as I reach for the map. "8 more miles and we're at our apartment!" I yell excitedly.

We finally reach the apartment building 15 minutes later. It's located right in Manhattan, right across from Central Park, on the corner of 96th Street. "You didn't tell me it was right beside Central Park?!" I say, playfully hitting Melissa.

"Well, I didn't know!" I park the car right beside the apartment, The Westmont. We enter side-by-side into a bright lobby, covered in mirrors. After checking in, the both of us go up to our apartment on the top floor.

In the furnished apartment, the living room is the first thing you see, and the kitchen is to the left. Melissa immediately runs into one of the bedrooms, screaming, "THIS IS MINE!"

I laugh as I check out the other bedroom. It has a walk-in closet and its own private bath. To top it all off, it has a personal patio, overlooking Central Park. "Wow," I mutter, as I go out onto the patio.

"How do you like it, Andrea?" Melissa asks, walking into my new bedroom.

"I love it!" I run to her and hug her tightly. "This is going to be amazing!" She just laughs and nods.

That night, we sit down at our dining table for dinner. "Our first meal together in our new apartment," I start, holding up a wine glass with water in it.

"Mac 'n' cheese," she says. "What could be better?" She lifts up her own glass. "We should make something like New Year resolutions."

"Yeah, like, some oaths and promises," I say, agreeing. "You first."

"Okay I promise to always keep my bedroom clean," she says and we laugh. "And I promise to get a good job, so we can always keep up with our rent."

"Good idea," I say.

"Now you."

"I also promise to get a good job to keep up with the rent. And I promise to start anew and not fall in love with anyone while in this city." We both nod, understand the reason for that pledge.

"Amen, sister," Melissa says, edging her glass toward mine. We knock our glasses together too hard and spill water everywhere. Instead of panicking, we just laugh at each other. "I'll go get the paper towels," Melissa says, dying of laughter.

"Okay," I say, also giggling loudly.
_______________________________

  • likes, 0 dislikes

Link to this comment:

Share to:

Uploader Comments (iluvjah2)

  • Haha, I like the end, it was cute. :P

    Yes, I know this comment took forever. I seriously have had this video pulled up for 48 hours until I finally decided to read/comment. (I knew if I closed it I'd forget to :P) So, basically I'm a lazy ass procrastinator and you should yell at me for it. :)

    Anyways, I really enjoyed the episode, it was cute and VERY real, which is always nice. :D I can't wait for this story to really start moving--you BETTER post up soon! :P

  • *yells at you for being a lazy ass procrastinator*

    Happy?

  • this is cool.what editing system do you use?

  • xxrawrchick92xx made it. I think she uses Sony Vegas 7.

Top Comments

  • omg this is amazinggg ! but you kinda switched around the tenses- you had past, present, and vice versa. but idc- I L♥VE THIS. you are going to be an author. and im going to read ur books and say " i read this girl's stories on youtube." (:

see all

All Comments (16)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • As long as I am forgiven for being said lazy ass procrastinator. :P

  • i love it so far! i feel sorry for andrea thogh being heart broken so many times befor :(

  • luv ur series!!

    i don't think ive told you this, but i also LOVE your icon

  • Personally, loved this chapter :)

  • Aww xD

    Their friendship is so awesome

    <33 them alreadyy

    Dang their living sounds awesome, they better find a good job

    Lucky themm

  • OMG lOve it!! BtW me and you have the same name LOL

  • Amazingg x3

Loading...

Alert icon
0 / 00Unsaved Playlist Return to active list
    1. Your queue is empty. Add videos to your queue using this button:
      or sign in to load a different list.
    Loading...Loading...Saving...
    • Clear all videos from this list
    • Learn more