Dragon Ball Z: The FInal Clash (Short Fan Fic)

My final fan fic

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• dragon
• ball
• dbz
• dragonballz
• the
• final
• clash
• goku
• vegeta
• super
• saiyan
• smash
• bros
• brawl
• budokai
• tenkaichi

[gwaga56]

wats the name of the song at the very begining?

[Spralwers]

If there's one piece of advice I can give you for the future, it's to have cleaner fight choreography. The only gripe I've ever had with your fics is that it's so obvious when you make edits. It's easy to tell when you just repeat clips. Alot of choreography just doesn't flow. Edit so that everything looks natural. Edit so that only tenkaichi players can tell you've made edits.

I don't know why I never told you this earlier, but keep that in mind. I guarantee you much more success with that.

[2008Flame]

If there's one piece of advice I can give you for the future, it's to have cleaner fight choreography. The only gripe I've ever had with your fics is that it's so obvious when you make edits. It's easy to tell when you just repeat clips. Alot of choreography just doesn't flow. Edit so that everything looks natural. Edit so that only tenkaichi players can tell you've made edits.

I don't know why I never told you this earlier, but keep that in mind. I guarantee you much more success with that

[AquaProduction]

I have to agree with Sprawlers. Sorry Lil you made so many great fanfics but just gave up and started a new ones. You are a great fanfic creator Lil. I salute to you.

[Spralwers]

In the end though, I had fun watching your stuff :)