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An actual piece of fantasy fiction from fictionpress.com
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2584854/1/The_Vampire_Princess

SPECIAL THANKS TO KAGOME111!

unabridged

Chapter 1

Lighting struck upon the sky above us, but the blood shed kept coming. My brown straight hair held in its bun, my tight red leather pants held to my legs protecting them from the rain, my green eyes glittered with the rain, matching my green tank top that hooked under my leather pants. Blood covered my brown boots, I cried in disgust. A hit on the head made me fall. "Jackie!" Someone yelled my name, this someone is my best friend childhood friend Charles. His soaked short black hair stuck to his face, his brown eyes glowed in the darkness around us. Charles is a Vampire, he was born one. Charles grabbed my hand and pulled me up, "Are you alright Jackie?" he asked. I nodded and picked up my sword, "yes." I simply replied. "Pay more attention!" "Charles! Gothica is in trouble!" I yelled. Charles spun around with a growl, Gothica was another male vampire. He had long white hair, usually tied up with a band, he had blood red eyes. If you knew us well this would be no surprising scene, ever since I met the vampire boys (which was 14 years ago) we always found ourselves in trouble. But this time was the worse, we (Gothica, Charles, and I) all stood here on the KingS Bridge, soaking wet, and possibly getting more soaked as the rain came down. Making it even worse was that the ugly monsteress goblins that surrounded us. "Die!" I yelled striking a Goblin threw the heart. "Jackie! Behind you!" I heard Gothica yell. I turned bringing my sword up slicing a goblin in the throat. "Thanks!" I yelled back. "No problem!" I heard Gothica reply sticking his thumb up. I smiled and continued slicing and killing every goblin that stood before me. I let out a quiet gasp when my legs were lifted off the ground, someone had grabbed my throat from the behind. The person brought be closer to them, I could smell rotten meat, now I noticed it wasnt someone, it was the master goblin. "You and your friends have tortured us enough, weve been suffering for eighteen years." he growled against my ear. "Eighteen years? How could you have been suffering eighteen years if my friends and I were only newborns? We didnt start fighting you guys till we were seven." I replied back, I know I shouldnt of, but with being with Charles and Gothica I couldnt help it. The Master Goblin chuckled deeply "You have a smart mouth." "Well, you stink." The Master Goblin growled, "Die Vampire Princess!" he yelled, throwing me into the air. soon I was in his arms, his wings spread out. "Charles! Your not supposed to do that! What if someone sees?" I yelled panicky. Charles growled deep in his throat, nobody knew he or Gothica were vampires, only I did. "I wasnt just going to stand there waving and watching you fall to your death!" he yelled back over the rain. If your wondering why the Master Goblin had called me Vampire Princess. Well, because I am a princess, but I had ran away long ago. (who knew a princess could fight?) Charles set me down back on the bridge, I heard the crumple of his wings as they faded into his back. "Your staying with me." he ordered. "I can fight!" I argued. He smiled at me and soon his lips were on mine. "Yes, but dont argue." Did you figure it out? Charles is my vampire lover (no whoreish way). Im supposed to be his wife soon, and nobody likes that (who would?). If I became a vampire, I became his wife, three vampires equaled hell for the whole world, counting the children we might have. "Fine" I mumbled. He nodded and grabbed my hand dragging me past the dead bodies of goblins. "Gothica! I have her!" Charles mumbled proudly. "Good, welcome back to the party Jackie." he said while striking a goblin. Charles quickly put my hair back in its bun, he was so paranoid that a goblin would grab me by the hair and slice my throat. Sooner then later we were done. Dead bodies of goblins surrounded us, the smell of blood filled the air.

© Copyright 2008 Kagome111
made with full cooperation of the author

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  • making fun? they didn't even change anything?

    5 stars

  • I pity the author. o__o

    XD This cracks me up.

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  • Children need to clam they tits.

  • is justa story

  • Wtf? Ya'll gonna do that to my sister?! You guys are so fucking low! Damn I wish I could be as cool as you! She was 10 when she wrote this, so you're basically making fun of a fucking lil child that has had a great future ahead of her and now ya'll made her all FUCKING DEPRESSED!!! You're seriously immature for this! It's her career not yours! stay off of her shit! If ya'll don't I'll report ya'll! Either delete it or I'll get your shit and make fun of yours got me?! Stupid fucking bitches.

  • you guys ruined it, it sounded way better reading it.

  • I like it if you ask me, So what about grammer? Do you even know this perosn to be making fun of her story? How do you know he doesn't have a health problem where they can't spell? Delete this, its awful and embarrasing. I won't lie, i know the person that wrote this. She is a very close friend of mine. and how you guys are making fun of her is awful. it's so sad...

  • You guys are so funny. You should start over with a new story.

  • THIS IS BRILLIANT!!

  • Alright. It's kinda grown on me. Now I only gag...

  • woah is your name by any chance jack you kinda look like him and you sound alot like him

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