||Breathe|| Chapter 1 [Part2]

"Why are you sad? It's prom." I asked her.
"I hate proms."
Seemed like we had the same opinion on proms. Great. "So, you're crying because you hate prom so much?" I know, that was maybe the weirdest thing to say...

She faced away, tears streaming down her face again. For a moment I thougt she wasn't going to say anything, but then she spoke. "No. My parents are out of town for a month. I promised them that I would take care of my sister, and my moms coffee shop." It was hard to make out the words, because she was taking short breaths after almost every word. "I have messed up big time."

Okay, so now she was telling me her life story... The whole situation felt a bit awkward, and normally I would probably have walked away. But for some reason I did feel bad for her, and I couldn't leave her here. "I hate prom too." I told her.

The girl sniffed once more, and then she looked up at me. "Why is that?"
I shrugged my shoulders. "No reason"
She moved over and gave me a sign to sit down next to her.
The feeling of sitting there with her was like nothing I had ever experienced before. It was quiet, but it wasn't awkward.

"Wanna go?" She sighed.
I raised one eyebrow. "Go where?"
"I don't know. But I don't want to be here."
We got up, and started walking away. The girl looked happier now. I was wondering what she meant by 'I messed up big time'.

I wasn't really paying attention to where we were going, but all of a sudden I could hear music. I looked around, and we were standing at place that looked like it was taken from a fairytale. She smiled.
I don't know where I got the courage from, but I took her hand, and I asked her to dance.

||Miley||
It was so surreal. I was dancing at prom, with the most amazing guy ever. It was like he was taken out of my thoughts. I had no idea who he was, or where he came from, but I felt something I had never felt before. It was a wonderful feeling. Just looking into his eyes made me breathless. And his perfect curls. I just wanted to run my hands to his hair. "Pinch me" I breathed.
"What?" He said.
"This is the best prom ever."
He chuckled, and I realised that the music had fallen scilent.
"I thought you hated proms?"
I studied his face "This one is different"
His lips twisted into a smile.
"You said you hate proms too." I reminded him.
"I changed my mind."

||Nick||
All of a sudden, her eyes widened. I was trying to see what she was looking at.
"Stop staring!" She hissed and held one hand to hide her face or something. Then she mumbled something that sounded like 'Im not here'. I couldn't help but laugh.

After a minute she carefully glanced at me. "Are they gone?"
I chuckled. "Who?"
Then, a phone started ringing. The girl looked at me apologeticly. "I have to go" She kissed my cheek and then she was gone.

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It was so long, that I had to split it in two parts :] So, yeah.. Tell me what you think about the story (not the couple)! I didn't get alot of comments on the trailer. I think it's because most of you are Nelena fans. I decided to post this anyway. I personally don't really have an opinion on who Nick should date, haha, I think the boy can decide for himself... ;]

15 COMMENTS IF I AM GOING TO CONTINUE MAKING THIS STORY

there is this contest called "Autumn Awards" some of the categorys are; best writer, best Niley story and best Nelena story... It would be so nice of you if you nominated me....
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[123lolaLOLAlola123]

wow, like i said on the 1st part, i truly am a nelena fan, but i love how this story is going, and if u do upload the nxt ones, i will totally read them!

ur an amazing writer! w. nelena or niley stories! LOVE ALL UR STORIES!!! (also jemi, can't forget that one!) plz upload more! ur stories r awesome!!! (and i know this is weird but also don't forget 2 upload more Move On eps.) BOTH OF UR LATEST STORIES R AWESOME! (this one and Move On) :)

btw: stars= 5/5, as i always rate them :)

[JoBroGurl145]

Im going to upload Move On today too :]

Im so glad you like it

[xoxoamorefulable]

AMAZING I'M Z HUGE NILEY FAN LOVE IT

[Carabloom]

yay, great job, :)

[JoBroGurl145]

Yes, it's a niley

[xHARM0NiiZ3xM3x]

coolness(:

[alycataj2]

I'm a huge Niley fan and I luved how you did your story where it's Nick and Miley telling their story not where you just put their picture and something their saying on it and usually I dont like storys in description box's but this one was diffrent,I guess I could just feel the emotion you were putting into it,and the series is really great I hope you continue no matter how many view's and comments you get : )

[123lolaLOLAlola123]

yay!!! can't wait 2 read it!!! :)