The Best Damn Song

Please rate my music and lyrics (below)
A nice tune which comes off as a casual ballad, but has a beautifully poetic sinister side. Email me for the lyrics. I welcome all comments, good or bad - but constructive is best.
Copyright Jason T. Brown

Lyrics
I'm sitting on my balcony, strumming my guitar
Searching for chords for a melody
I just left the bar, and can't find the keys
And the waves echo back a lonely C

And I want to write you the best damn song
I want my words to move you
I want the rhythm like a river to roll on
I want my voice to consume you
I want this symphony to seep into your soul
I want you to be possessed by my poem
And I want to write you the best damn song
I want to write you the best damn song.

I'm driving lost through dark streets, searching for a sign
I have to paint a picture that nobody's seen
I just left the bar, and you never showed
But I'm going to haunt you with this melody

And I want to write you the best damn song
I want the words to rule you
I want the rhythm like a river to flow on
I want my voice to consume you
I want this symphony to seer into your soul
I want you to captured by my prose
And I want to write you the best damn song
I want to write you the best damn song

And I want to write you the best damn song
I want the words to rule you
I want the rhythm like a river to roll on
I want my voice to consume you
I want this symphony to singe into your soul
I want you to be imprisoned by this poem

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Pop
• Rock
• 80's
• rock
• Billy
• Joel
• Elton
• John
• Britney
• Spears
• Country
• Bee
• Gees
• Eagles

[truejourneycritic]

ironically, the best damn song from this artist. lyrics have nice irnoic musical reverbrations. music needs a little more, but like the 3/4 - 4/4 transition, but wont be able to dance to it.

[feralmusic]

nice.