Egao no Wake (sung by me)

This is my second attempt at doing a karaoke. I tried to listen to people's suggestions and sing louder, but it still might be soft, so you might want to turn up the volume. This is my first attempt at mixing, so it sounds....BAD. feel free to offer criticism as long as it is contructive. I'm not sensitive, but I don't appreciate flaming. Enjoy!

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• shounen
• onmyouji
• shonen
• onmyoji
• egao
• no
• wake
• sung
• by
• me
• karaoke
• anime
• hikita
• kaori

[seirine1]

(sure that i'll get disapprovements) but don't take me negatively, i just wanted to let you know that when you sing, don't be too close to the mic. No offence ^-^''

Nice voice, BTW. You can be a good singer if you want to.

[aminayama]

Don't worry. ^^ Constructive criticism is always welcome.

Thank you for the feedback. It helps me to improve.

[sevv88]

Ah, and I mean no offence, really -__- I hope you don't mind my comments? Don't take them in a bad way, because that's not how they were intended. ^__^;

[aminayama]

Ah, don't worry. ^^

This is really helpful. Constructive criticism is not offensive, and shows that you cared enough to make a long, detailed comment.

Thank you very much!

[sevv88]

Oh and one more thing: To sing that loudly, at first it will probably feel as though you're yelling or shouting.. ^__^,, it does, after singing quietly for a long time, trust me haha! ;'3 and of course not all songs are sung like that, but I think Egao no wake should be a bit louder.:) You can hear the original singer go "SUBETEEEE--"(1:05) and really sing out LOUD at some parts :)

[aminayama]

Heh...yeah. It felt like I was shouting every time I tried that.

I might try this song again later on.

[pinkangel1446]

i can here that your not using your real voice, if you use real voice you will sound better, and try not to force yourself but its great!!!!!!!!!!!

[Taekwondo86]

very good! bit of some constructive criticism? it seems just like what seirine was saying, a bit too close to mic. also try to not take too many breathes. at a couple of times, u were a bit off cause of a breath. just practice that, get a bit farther from the mic, sing OUT more, and you'll be perfect! you sound so amazing as is! keep it up!! one last thing. sometimes if you dont try to be so quiet, it actually helps with the length of a breath. sugoi! i wanna hear more! <3 ^_^

[cielle4vr]

sing loudly!! i can't hear ur beautiful voice!! and it's really good to record ur voice and listen to it many times, so that u can see some mistakes u might'v made, or how much ur in tune, stuff like that. that's how i improved. i listened to mizuki nana's songs every day and sang loud until my sister was ready to punch my ovaries XD

[aminayama]

I see...Thank you very much.

I seriously don't know anything about singing, so this helps a lot!

[Shinobifuji]

noooo really? i highly doubt that. you're so good. i'm sure you have the stamina