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Uploaded by on Jun 26, 2009

Here we go. My new story...whoop whoop! Haha. Soo. The winners are...drum roll please!

In first place, getting me 30+ friends is...xozeebabyxo! Congratulations. Message me with which character you would like to play. [I'm assuming you want Nick since that's what you said in your entry.] In second place, getting me 24 friends is...jbstories023! Congratulations. You will see which character you are in the upcoming chapters. In third place, getting me 20 friends is...iheartjonas23. Congratulations! You're one of the random girls. Haha. I know what I'm going to have them be now. And trust me. It's a good character to play for now. :] And then in fourth place getting me five friends is...mrsjonasproductions. Congratulations! You're the other random girl. Believe it or not those are the only ones that were competing, expect for one other person that only ended with three friends. Very close. Alright. Now that all of that is established...here comes the story. I don't think it's what you're expecting, so please. No hate if you don't like it. Tell me your honest opinion in the nicest way and give me tips if need be. Thank you. :] Enjoy! Oh. And I'll also need a title. :]

Characters:
Jobrosarehott21 [meee]-
Kinsley- 18 years old, best friends are Zoe and Eline

Xozeebabyxo-
Zoe- 16 years old, friends with Kinsley and Eline

Jbstories023-
Eline- 20 years old, friends with Kinsley and Zoe

Mrsjonasproductions-
Erin- 16 years old, Nick Jonas' current girlfriend

Iheartjonas23-
Chelsea- 21 years old, Kevin's current girlfriend


[News Reporter]

"This just in. The pop sensations Nick, Joe, and Kevin from the Jonas Brothers have been seen with three young ladies. Do these three heartthrobs have girlfriends? Stay tuned for the whole story, tonight at nine."

[Kinsley's pov]

"Nooo. There goes my future with Joey." I screeched, grabbing for the remote to turn the tv off. "Kinsley. You never had a chance with him anyway. You know they'd never date a fan." Eline explained, staring at my laptop that sat on her lap. "There's no way you guys are going to be ready in an hour." Zoe shouted, making both Eline and I jump. "Oh come off it. It's only a Jonas Brothers concert. What's the big deal?" Eline defended, closing the laptop, setting it next to her on the floor. "Only a Jonas Brothers concert!? What is wrong with you!? We've been waiting months for this." I shouted, trying to forget Eline didn't really like the Jonas Brothers as much as Zoe and I. She liked them, but she wasn't obsessed with them. Believe it or not, she doesn't even have a favorite. I think she secretly likes Kevin though. "Can you two please get ready? I want to see Nicholas!" Zoe shouted, stomping back up the stairs.

I ran up the stairs to my room, gathering a bunch of clothes in my arms. I tried every possible outfit on. I decided to go with my white knee length dress, black ballet flats and a black shall to cover the spaghetti straps on my shoulders. I grabbed my pink and black polka dot purse off of my dresser and threw it over my shoulder. I let my curly hair fall just above my shoulders as I brought out my sparkly brown eyes with some eye liner and mascara. I topped it all off with a spray of perfume and one quick glance back in the mirror before heading downstairs, back into the living room. Zoe was wearing her dark blue skinny jeans with a purple t-shirt and a black belt around her waist. She wore her black converse since she didn't have the best balance for heels. She also left her blonde hair in curls, letting it fall to her mid back. Eline on the other hand had on a white v-neck with dark jean shorts that made her long tan legs look even longer and more tan. She had black pumps and a pearl necklace that hung around her neck. She wore barely any makeup, but a lot of lip gloss. She tied her hair back in a messy bun, wearing her contacts instead of her usual glasses.

Eline grabbed the keys and we were off. We were on the road by 3:00. It only took about 20 minutes to get to the venue, and the doors didn't open until 6:00. We still had to get our tickets though. I was worried it was going to be sold out. We pulled into the parking lot, aware of the small amount of girls sitting outside the locked doors. There were probably about 10 people standing there. I quickly got out of the car and ran over to them.

Part Two Up Soon! :]

I own nothing but the writing!

Song: Love Story- Taylor Swift

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  • YOU ARE MY PAST, PRESENT, AND FUTURE idk that sounds too long tho i mean... idk can u check otu my NEW series?

  • Of course. :] What's it called?

  • ohh wow, im surprised i actually got a part! i dont know if i can read all the chapters you posted, im on my aunts computer, out of town and i dont know how long i can be on. im gonna try though.

    im excited!! (:

  • Haha. Okay! :]

  • Yay :)

    I'm in it!

    Great chapter!

  • Thank you! :]

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  • shit, slideshow crap

  • hehe. I love this so much =] I don't get why you say you don't think you write good... off to read more!

  • Thanks so much! You're welcome. :]

  • AWESOME!!!

    I <3 this series so far :) :) :)

    And thx for letting me be in it!!!

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

    5 stars!!!

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