Watch the video!! Hey, guys, I'm not really getting as many comments and views as I would like. I'm wondering if it's worth continuing the series or not...
"In my wildest dreams, you always play the hero. In my darkest hour of night, you rescue me, you save my life."
--Bliss and Cerney
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Forty five minutes later, Emily heard the doorbell ring. Surprised, she straightened her white and yellow sundress and answered the door. Nick was standing on the other side, buttoning up his light blue dress shirt, his curly hair still dripping from his shower. She noticed that one of his Converse was still untied and that his collar was still flipped up.
"Hi," she said, stifling a giggle.
"Forty five minutes," he told her triumphantly, placing his Rolex around his wrist.
"I'm very proud of you," she teased, stepping aside and letting him inside the house.
The smell of bacon and pancakes hit Nicks nose as soon as he stepped inside the door. Emily led Nick silently into the kitchen, where his brothers, Brooklyn, and Danielle were helping themselves to eggs, miscellaneous fruits and an array of juices, along with the bacon and pancakes he smelled before.
"Who did all this?" he asked, gesturing to the impressive spread before him.
"Me," Emily responded breezily, moving past him to grab two plates. Handing one to him, she smiled warmly. "Help yourself!"
He glanced over at Joe, then back to Emily. "Wait. How did you get him awake?"
"The smell of bacon seemed to work like a charm," she grinned, then walked over to talk to Dani and Kevin.
Half an hour later, everyone began to leave to go do whatever it was they were going to do, leaving Nick and Emily alone to get started.
"I'll be up in a second!" Emily called upstairs where Nick was following her directions to one of the rooms.
"Two doors from the end on the left," he muttered to himself, then opened the door marked by an insanely awesome mural of music notes, lyrics, and an old microphone. He even saw some of his own lyrics to 'A Little Bit Longer' on the door.
Behind the door was a large room with sage green walls filled with about twelve to fifteen guitars, a baby grand piano, an electric keyboard, a digital drum set, and state-of-the-art recording equipment. On one table, a Macbook was set up. Above that was a plasma screen TV, which faced a white couch with burnt orange throw pillows.
Nick was admiring her guitar collection when he heard her open the door and enter the room.
"What is this place?" he asked in awe.
"My music room," she announced, then steered him over to the couch. She quickly grabbed some papers off the cushions before turning to put a DVD into the player.
Nick notice she'd left a sheet behind and stuck it in the pocket of his skinny jeans before she noticed.
"Nick," she said finally, looking him in the eye. "There's something you need to see."
Sitting down beside him, she pushed the Play button on the DVD remote, and Nick appeared on the screen.
"I think one of the most important things about being in this business is staying humble," the onscreen Nick began.
Out of the corner of her eye, Emily could see Nick take a deep breath. 'Here we go,' he thought, braceing himself. He was ready to take whatever beating he had to, if it meant spending more time with her.
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OK, please, give me some comments this time guys. I'm not getting hardly any feedback, so I can't be sure whether or not y'all like it.
Ok, question. Do u guys think I would get more views and comments if I do, like, POVs, and from different people? Or should i just keep it the same? Oh, and maybe I can post a question at the end of each chapter for everyone to answer. what do you guys think?
njerryjonas14 2 years ago
I like what you are doing so far.
But if you think POVs are better then that is your choice..
You are the writer after all!
I have no advice on the comments thing.
I'll recommend you when I post my next chapter!
adventurous18 2 years ago
thanks so much! i luv ur stories, so it means a lot to hear that!!
njerryjonas14 2 years ago