Some very nice guitar playing there, kind of an Ed sheeran vibe going on.
Love the use of harmonics.
TBH the lyrics could use some work and the vocals will come with practice, you're focusing too much on the singing and missing the connection with the words and emoting.
The last phrase I used in my other comment was "Lets break down some walls." Could be a going starting point for a new track. If you don't do it I will ;)
I like it. In a way, it reminds me of Alanis Morissette, especially in the guitar and percussive rhythm. Very well done, I like the impromptu pop muffler (or whatever the hell they're called) covered in duct tape.
As always, great job man! I really liked this one, from the instrumentals to the lyrics. THe one thing is, the singing sounds a little off in this one. I think you could lower your pitch a little, or (I can't believe I'm saying this...) make it a little more rap.
Hey man, just thought I'd check your channel.
Some very nice guitar playing there, kind of an Ed sheeran vibe going on.
Love the use of harmonics.
TBH the lyrics could use some work and the vocals will come with practice, you're focusing too much on the singing and missing the connection with the words and emoting.
The last phrase I used in my other comment was "Lets break down some walls." Could be a going starting point for a new track. If you don't do it I will ;)
TheDesignGuru 2 days ago in playlist Uploaded videos
I like it. In a way, it reminds me of Alanis Morissette, especially in the guitar and percussive rhythm. Very well done, I like the impromptu pop muffler (or whatever the hell they're called) covered in duct tape.
Earphonesan 4 weeks ago
very nice
destien 1 month ago
As always, great job man! I really liked this one, from the instrumentals to the lyrics. THe one thing is, the singing sounds a little off in this one. I think you could lower your pitch a little, or (I can't believe I'm saying this...) make it a little more rap.
halterman666 1 month ago