Caught in my life (Freewrite)

Just a freewrite i wrote. Inspired by Drakes (Paris Morton Music). The singing in the beginning was simply for inspiration, (I know i cant sing). Constructive Criticism please. One of my first recordings.

Would've came back for you, I just needed time, to do what I had to do

caught in the life, I cant let it go whether that's right I will never know,

hoping you will forgive me, never meant wrong,

tried to be patient, waited to long,

but I would've came back, but i would've came back,




I hope that she forgives me for the times that would permit me,

For the moment of the second chances i know i took for granted, yeah,

But the time didn't let me, i didn't want to hate you, but love you wouldn't let me,

And I'm sorry for the nights, that took for granted,

But the chances that you took, It seems they never landed,

but i hope that she forgives me, and i hope time can heal,

I hope that through all the suffering and the pain you made me feel,

I hope that you learned from them and take solace in the night,

i hope that she forgives me, For the days that we would fight,

the days that grew cold, when the flame grew dim,

The web that we based our friendship on, the string became so thin, yeah.

But i hope that she forgives me, for us going our separate ways,

I hope she understands, it was too painful for me to stay,

Because my heart wasn't in it, to simply be taken,

My heart didn't think that it was to be forsaken.

I hope that she forgives me, come November,

When i neglected to wish her, even though i couldn't forget her,

But i hope that she forgives me, when she sees what i got her,

I imagine the struggles, of the days when i sought her,

But i hope she will forgive me, because i am not forgetful,

Because my heart cant stop thinking, of the times that i would kiss her,

I hope that she forgives me, because i cant forgive myself,

Because the struggles are so strong i cant help but miss her,

But when i call out to the heavens, and tell god to save me,

He tells me in my heart that the best way to repay me,

Is for him to give me repentance, And to redeem my sins,

that when i think I'm losing, that's how i will win,

But i hope that she forgives me, because i cant live without her touch,

And when she knows that i have been too much,

I hope that she forgives me, because i cant forget her one day,

Her love wasn't forgotten, i just don't know what to say,

And i hope that she forgives me, Because my last act of love,

Was enacted by the times that i would call from above,

And cry out to god for him to give me a second, a moment a volume,

A face that can be reckoned, and a second chance i gave her, to be happy forever,

I hope she forgives me, because i did this as my last endeavor,

and i hope that she forgives me, because i had to set you free,

I didn't get rid of you, i made you get rid of me.

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• Poetry
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• Dej Jam
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• Spoken word