Ok this is my first commentary. There are a few mistakes but i want to keep it authentic. You should find it some what amusing with some of the things i say. There not funny, just mistakes :P but we all start somewhere. looking for feed back the game is really good so at least watch it for the game. If u cant stand my voice turn the sound down :P
You certainly have no clue why the zerglings were attacking that neutral artifact...?
xTnT87 2 years ago
good effort but remember what commentary is all about, describing what is going on in real time to an audience.
Too much of your commentary rambling to yourself and saying stuff like "oh many why are you doing that, you should do this" etc...
Dont bring your emotions into it so much, don't show any bias...
FRIENDLYMEXICANBOY 2 years ago
That was gay.
Psychotronical 2 years ago
Woot. Make more. I like it. Wish you had the third part. Incredible game :)
Amoeba0012 2 years ago
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dude i am not being mean so u can put thumbs down on me but U HAVE TO DO UR COMMENTARY NOT SOMEONE ELSES. THIS IS NOT UR REPLAY AND AS WELL STARCRAFT 2 IS COMMING OUT AND THIS MIGHT BE THE END OF STARCRAFT SO SHOW THE WORLS ALL ABOUT STARCRAFT! DON\T SHOW OTHER PRO PLAYER THERE SHOULD BE NOOBS AND OTHER PEOPLE ON THE WEB THAT U CAN SHOW
mpyo101 2 years ago
Your commentating is a little fast sometimes, and your voice stutters a lot (whether due to nervousness, or what), but overall, this was a fine commentary, especially from a person who's newer to the commentating scene.
redninjastarx 2 years ago 2