My Version Of Detention (One Shot- Part 2)

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Uploaded by on Jan 29, 2010

Hannahs P.O.V
I went and sat at a desk and he looked over at me.
Nick- do you know what youre going to talk about in your essay?
I sighed.
Hannah- that corporal punishment sucks, and its not fair.
He chuckled.
Nick- I dont think so, be serious, what do you want to do?
Hannah- I was thinking about talking about fairytales, girls get their hopes up so much, and then the first guy they find they think will be the one, and they are just setting themselves up for heartbreak.
Nick- girls being able to separate fairytale and reality and understand that its just a story.
He stated.
I nodded.
He put some things in his bag then stood up.
Nick- okay, lets get going.
I packed up my stuff then walked with him outside and drove home with him.
When we pulled up at our house we got out and went inside, I went up to my room and got changed out of my school uniform, yes, uniform, our school is private, and it has a school uniform. There was a knock on my door and I sighed.
Hannah- come in.
Nick came in,shutting the door behind him.
He sat on my desk chair and faced me, I had sat on my bed.
Nick- Hannah, I want you to try harder, dont get into trouble as much, you know I love you, and I dont like it when youre late for my class because you were kept back in another one.
I sighed.
Nick- come here.
I didnt move.
Nick- Im not kidding Hannah, get your backside here right now.
I stood up, my feet not letting me take the three easy steps to him.
Finally I took one step, but my feet refused to go any further.
Nick leant forward and grabbed my waist and brought me close to him, I turned and tried to get away, but he pulled me close and held me there with his legs.
Hannah- no, nick, please!
I tried to pull away but he pulled me back against his chest.
Nick- Hannah, calm down, stop making this worse for yourself.
He reached his arms around me and undid the tie that was holding my pants up.
He pulled them down past my thighs and let them fall the rest of the way down.
Nick- now, are you going to co-operate? Or do I need to get your hairbrush?
I whimpered and shook my head.
Hannah- no, no, Its okay, Ill do what you say, promise!
He let go of my waist.
Nick- okay, lets get this over and done with.
He said, bringing me over his lap.
His hand started landing down on my backside fast and hard, after a couple of minutes he had me sobbing, four minutes and I was limp and after a few more spanks he stopped and rubbed my back.
Once I had calmed down a little he picked me up and sat me on his lap gently.
Hannah- nicky, Im sorry, I will be better, I promise.
Nick- you better be babygirl.
I buried my face in his neck and he rubbed my back.
Nick- I love you, and I only do this because I love you and want you to do well in school.
I nodded.
Hannah- I love you too nicky.
He smiled and kissed my head.
Nick- okay, lets go downstairs, I will make dinner and you can work on your homework.
I groaned and he laughed and stood me up.
He stood up and picked up my shorts, throwing them at me then walking out of the room.

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Uploader Comments (chuppachupp93)

  • Like I said, awesome! This could be an awesome story lol

  • yeah, i was thinking that, gonna try it.

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  • luv it

  • Lame

  • Awesome where joe n kevin or is it not one of them? How old is Nick n hannah? X

  • awesome

  • Loved it (:

  • amazing one shot

  • yea it would be a really cool story. something different

  • this was really good!

  • This was really awesome! I agree with everyone else that you should definitely make this into a story!

  • this is awesome!!!!!

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